Too much sweet,
where is the lime?
This tastes like cotton candy,
fruit and my,
it's just too sweet for me.
I have an aching in my teeth because it's, sweet,
sweet,
sweet,
my mouth, throat and tongue are coated with it,
tacky with this sweet—
and I hate to think this is what to much sweetness can do.
This is sweetness in extreme and it makes it hard to breathe.
Can I muddle through this?
Take the taste of of my mind,
maybe with the bitterness of lime?
I suck in air as I despair of never forgetting this sweet,
sweet sweet,
sickly sweet.
My guts a mess with it,
and it's churning round and round, and bitter bile replaces all,
taste and sound comes shattering down,
as I hurl it all out.
There's a mess of throw up at my feet and the smells around me are not agreeing with me,
But still this dull feeling is better than that sweet,
I place a hand across my eyes,
and you see?
I'm on the side of bitter, if it's a matter of bittersweet.
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