The First to Fall (Star Wars X Male Reader) [SOON TO BE WORKED ON AGAIN]

School Days (Part 4)

It's been about a month since I've infiltrated the school, I've made friends with Paytan's friends. Speaking of Paytan, we still haven't talked about the kiss. The names of her rich friends are Doug, Chris, and Jan.

We've got a big lead now, a cave where an enemy of the murdered student was known to hang out in, we're hoping to find evidence that he did it, a datapad, physical journal, recorded conversation, anything.

It's sparring class now, my first spar, they've judged me as a sort of prodigy, but they haven't told anyone else yet, and are trying to judge how good I really am. The teacher is putting me up against Paytan, Chris, and Jan.

I grab my Templar Industries Vibrosword:

They grab spears, a good counter for swords, unless you're as good as I am with them. Paytan stabs, I parry into a punch to the face, stunning her. Jan and Chris are slashing from above me, I run and shoulder tackle Jan, sending her spear flying out of her hands, and disqualifying her.

Paytan comes charging at me with her spear point out, I dodge and use her momentum by tripping her, she doesn't let go of her. I notice Chris about to stab me in the hand, which I use the force to speed myself up and spin into a pommel strike to the back of his head, sending him to the ground, and his spear out of his hand, disqualifying him.

Paytan is about to overhead strike me, I side step and let it hit the ground and bounce up, where I then grab the shaft and yank it towards me. I don't notice her fist flying towards my face, smacking me in the nose. My eyes begin watering, a normal unconscious reaction to that, and my nose bleeding.

She strikes at my face, I speed myself up through the force and snap her spear end off with my right hand pushing left on the blade, and my left pushing right on the shaft. I kick her in the side of her knee and she falls onto her knees, I grab her spear and take it from her hands. Once my victory has been announced I throw the snapped spear, sheath my sword, and re-set my broken nose.

(Was this a good fight scene? I want actual feedback on how to get better at this..)

I help Paytan up.

Y/N: No hard feelings?
She let's me help her up.
Paytan: None at all.

Timeskip___________

All five of us are sitting in a booth at the Foolish Saber talking about school. We get going to the cave relatively quick. It's rainy out today, so I put my poncho's hood up. We walk in a comfortable silence to the cave, I have my vibrosword and a blaster on me:

After about thirty minutes of walking, and ten minutes on a sky rail we make it there. I have a flash light, and so do the other humans. Paytan has night vision. We walk through till we find a lit area and the victims enemy sleeping.

I use GBSL to get Doug to tie him up, Doug is the only one of us other than me to have learned GBSL. While we investigate. I find a note on a datapad that reads:
Shit, I didn't mean to kill him, I just wanted to rough him up a little bit, make him regret missing payday on the three thousand creds he borrowed from me, FUCK this is bad. -Jo'ohni

Shit, I tuck the note away in my pocket, and sign for Doug to stop tying him up. We get out of the cave unnoticed.

TIMESKIP________

When I get back to campus I make a beeline to the headmaster's office.

Y/N: Yeah, it was Jo'ohni who did it.
Headmaster: Alright, you'll have to make a speech, revealing your real identity and who did it.
Y/N: Really?
Headmaster: It's a legal thing.
Y/N: Sounds about right.

(Sorry it was such a short chapter, whoever reads this.)