Zack the wife killer

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Zack's POV
I awoke to an empty hospital room and a burning tenderness on my right side. I look down and saw a scar upon my abdomen.....unaware how it got there. Am afraid the amnesia may be affecting my past and present memory.

In came my doctor. I took up the pen and chart which they provided me with and i wrote; "Doc I think the amnesia may be affecting my overall ability to remember any and everything. Could you tell me why I have this scar upon my right side?"

"Yes I would, that is why am here. Yesterday I came in here and injected you with a sedative. Then I used and anesthetic rub and apply here and when you fell asleep I removed your right kidney", he said.

A puzzled look took over my face.
Why  would  he remove my kidney, I thought.

"Was something wrong with my kidney", I wrote.

"No, it is perfectly fine", he responded smiling.

"Then why remove it, are you crazy?", I wrote.

"For the same reason your tongue was removed and before you raise and alarm I have something you may want to read first."

I study the piece of paper up and down

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I study the piece of paper up and down. The hand writing was legitimate; in the sense that it was actually mine. Problem was I could not remember writing this. Who was Gina and what other wives were I referring to this did not make any sense.

"I don't understand why would I write that and who is Gina and what other wives?", I wrote.

"Allow me to refresh your memory", he said. "Before Gina you got married to a woman named Daisy. She was the love of my life and you took her away and then moved on to Gina like Daisy meant nth. You thought you were getting away but I have been waiting almost a year to get my revenge. The first thing i did was brought the house next door to you. Watched you as i planned my revenge. One day I broke into your house to kidnapp you and ran into your wife instead. She threatened to call the police so i came clean about everything. She didnt believe me at first until i showed her these many marriage certificate. She thrn took pity on me. Thats why she threw you out. Gina and I became close friends and then you took her too. That night I heard the argument, I knew for sure what would happen. I ran over to stop you but for sure I was too late. So I went back home and I called the police. And here we are today.......I will make sure you pay for your sins."

"Don't you think I have paid enough?" "You took away my ability to speak", I wrote.

"Paid lol.....You have not paided yet", he said as he got up and injected something into my drip line.

Just as before, sleepiness overtook me.

Rameila's POV
Phone Rings
Phone answered

"Hello"

"Hello Miss Rameila, I am Doctor Wright from St Joseph's Hospital. I don't know if you are aware buy you are listed here on file as Zacks next of Kin, hence you need to come to the hospital. There is something that needs your urgent attention."

"Am afraid that must be a mistake. That man killed my sister. Why would I be listed as his next of Kin."

"Apparently you inherited him."

"How the hell did I inherited a killer?"

"Your sister was listed as his Next of Kin original but previously she came here and signed papers which gave you that privilege if they were ever unconscious or incapable of making decisions."

"Well am sorry , I Can't. I do not wish to. Let him be alone, the way I am"

Rameila ends call .

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What kind of sick twisted Joke is, why would they do this to me, I wonder.

I really hope Zack dies, although I want to be the person who kills him. I wouldn't be mad if God did. Zack needs to pay and he needs to pay soon.

Mentally I always knew he wasn't to be trusted. Pay close attention to the villains in your stories. They are there for a reason. They said I was crazy, deranged even. But today here I am sisterless.

I think I'll just lay here in bed. And just let the depression have it's way today. I just don't feel like getting out of bed after that phone call. Loneliness hurts the most.

Narrator's POV
"Hush lil baby don't you cry, am gonna help you to kill  little Zacky boy. And when that lil Zacky boy dies, you will be the best serial killer ever."

This depression is just what I needed. This I can use.

" That's it my girl, let the sadness in, it will make you feel better I promise. You will never feel alone. This is the right thing to do. Let me take over for awhile. You did good. Now you deserve to rest."

Zack's POV

"Hello Zack, how are you feeling this morning."

"Am ok , Doctor Wright?", I wrote

"Remember anything?"

"Not yet", I wrote

I saw the doctor burst into laughter. I ignored and his morning crazies. Because I knew deep down there was something important I need to remember but I just couldn't.

Word from author
So it would seem Gina wasn't Zack's first Rodeo. In fact he had many wives he disposed of earlier. Will Zack memories come back? Will Zack survive the Doctor with the grudge? Will that phone call send Rameila spiraling? Will Rameila's get her revenge. All questions that need answers.  Maybe next chapter..........see you next write.

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