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Prologue
I kept running. My feet barely touched the ground as I quickened my pace. My heart was beating at a 100 miles per hour and I could hardly get oxygen to my lungs. My breathing was shallow and I could dimly see a faint light ahead of me as I sprinted through the dark hallways. It was so close yet so far....
I wanted so badly to reach the light but it seemed that the quicker I ran, the farther it pushed away. I was desperate. So desperate to reach it. I ran faster.
Tears were streaming down my cheeks at an unatural speed and my vision soon became blurred. This was a nightmare. A nightmare come true.
I could almost feel the cool, icy breath on the back of my neck and that sent my heart beat flying faster than before. I couldn't get caught. If I did...I would pay the consequence. It wouldn't be pretty.
I blinked away the wetness that covered my vision and nearly tripped over my own feet as I pumped my legs harder. The pain that shot up and down my body was unbearable. But I had to get away.
I then turned a corner, keeping an eye closely on the dim light, making sure it didn't leave me alone with the...the creatures I so despised. The ones that held me captive...torturing me...
I blew out a hard breath of air and not a second later began gasping for breath. My lungs burned as well as my body. The blood that trickled down the side of my face struck an open gash and I winced from the intense pain that went through my head. I was losing blood, quickly, but I had not time to think about that.
I knew that I wouldn't be able to run long, for I was growing weary and weak. I would eventually run out of steam and the adrenaline that ran through my body, the very thing that kept me alive and running right now, would soon stop and I would collapse to my doom.
I swallowed, my throat burning with thirst, and felt a small, grateful smile spread across my lips as the light started growing wider the closer I came to it. I was almost starting to relax as I began reaching it...
But just as I was about to reach it,
Just as I was about to jump through it with open arms and a cry of joy....
A pair of pale, icy hands reached from behind me and grasped me in a death grip.
Pulling me back.
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May 11, 2011
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*My*Darkest*Embrace*: {Prologue}
VampireIsabela Evans life used to be promising and happy. It used to be surrounded by the people she loved and nothing could rip her away from that. As if she were on top of the world and nothing could bring her down. She had loving parents and two older...