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As Rimuru and I step out of the portal we end up on a costal beach surrounded by a cliff with a small valley that works as the entrance and exit.
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We then notice a blonde teenager that appears to be about 16 to 17 years of age and a floating child with white hair that appears to be about 5-6 years of age.
"Hello there, my name is Rimuru and this is Velzard my wife. We are........... travelers" - says Rimuru awkwardly.
" Hello! My name is Paimon and this is Ran(for the sake of the story this will be Aether's nickname)" says the floating child.
Ran just nods confirming the information was accurate. we then walk through the valley with the two, to see a city in the middle of a lake beyond the valley. Before the city there was a very small lake? with a small island and a statue of someone on it. As we get closer to the statue Paimon starts to explain a little.
"The is a statue of one of the seven archons, Barbatos the anemo archon and the will of freedom." - explains Paimon in an annoying voice(her normal voice)
Rimuru POV:
As we got right in front of the statue Aether gets an odd pull towards the statue and after touching it, resonates with the statue gaining the ability to control anemo(wind). I then reach out to see if I can achieve the exact same result, but instead get a very angry and aggressive reaction that sends the four of us flying through the air at immense speeds. Me and Velzard due to us being true dragons are able to stabilize ourselves and land silently in the middle of a forest. Then the floating child ends up almost hitting the ground, but then caught herself with whatever she uses to float. I then see Ran crash onto the ground unceremoniously which made me laugh and Velzard giggle.
"Wonderful landing my good friend Ran" - cheerfully chirps Velzard(not making her to cold cause Rimuru has that effect on everyone)
