OK so I lost my account I'm continuing the book from my old account mushroomfrog18 if you want to read it go ahead but I'm continuing it on this accountu
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Here are the things I will be changing or removing from the story
1.flan will be removed since nobody neither me likes him and I want him gone 2.the dead siblings will be removed because they're just there for angst and they're not much important so ima get rid of them 3. Add less pure vanilla and wafer moments cause they took up half of the book 4. Fix pure vanilla and dark cacaos relationship cause I think I messed it up a lot 5. Wafer vanillas entire character cause he's a mess and I need to rewrite my mistake child 6. The sa in the book will be removed cause I do not think it's best I add sa to a purecacao book and back than I did not write it well at all and it most likely will be uncomfortable if I add it cause if I'm going to add dark themes or topics than I should at least write them right 7. Any characters like garden,bloodbath bakery, sparklingherb vampire (mint choco can stay) will be remove cause they're just dumb little silly things that are best not to be added cause they're mainly things that give wafer more book time so it's best they be remove 8. Wafer and mint choco relationship will be change since I think they're relationship went to fast and is kind of corney so I'm changing it 9. No sex scenes cause no they're be slight suggestive scenes but that's all nothing more 10. I might change the trans hc from pure vanilla being trans to mint choco since it was an old idea of mint choco being trans but that I will have to think about 11. I need to fox pure vanillas character cause I made him soft uwu boy that needs to be protected and can't defend himself which I mis characterized him a lot in the book That's all the things that I might change and remove so tell me what you think :3
