↳ 𝗕𝗘𝗦𝗧 𝗙𝗜𝗥𝗦𝗧 𝗖𝗛𝗔𝗣𝗧𝗘𝗥 [𝗥𝗘𝗦𝗨𝗟𝗧𝗦] ༉‧₊˚✧

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﹒1ST PLACE WINNER﹒

moon_ttea — The Phantom's Waltz

Grammar & Vocabulary: 9/10

Sentence Construction: 9.5/10

Opening Paragraph: 8/10

Intriguing Factor: 9/10

Interest to read the further chapters: 10/10

Total: 45.5/50

 Brief Review:I'm absolutely captivated by this story. Your ability to create such vivid imagery and evoke emotions with your words is truly impressive. I found myself completely immersed in the world you've crafted, eagerly devouring each sentence. It is such an underrated book.

"Driven by hypnotic compulsion, I followed the ominous strains deeper into the forest, guided only by the ethereal glow of fireflies that flew around me like flickering stars." This snippet gave me goosebumps as I felt like I was myself going into the deeper forest, following the fireflies. Your writing has a magical quality that pulls me into this fantastical world.

 Your writing has a magical quality that pulls me into this fantastical world

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﹒2ND PLACE WINNERS﹒

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