Questiona from Writer

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So everyone, I know you all are waiting for the new chapter of Survival Of The Fittest, trust me, I want to publish it too, but there is a little question I need to ask first:

Are you have trouble understanding what I'm writing? (Despite the few grammatical mistakes I managed to find...) Does the way I'm writing confusing you?

Which variation of text do you prefer?

1. "I have reviewed all I could, but it's of no use... This is the only we we can tell them..." Samuel said slightly irritated...
"Well how about you learn what it means to do that you pinche idiota!" Johnathan replied in an angry tone...

Or

2. Samuel: "I have reviewed all I could, but it's of no use... This is the only we we can tell them..."

John: "Well how about you learn what it means to do that you pinche idiota!"

Both of them argued with each other, as the conversation turned sour...

Which one do you prefer?

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