Update pt. 2

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Hello, everyone. Agent Linnell here. First off, nothing has really happened to me. I'm still fine, enjoying Helluva Boss, and Hazbin Hotel.

What I'm here to tell you about is the fact that I am now going to be remaking this story, from the beginning. Adding new lore of my own, fixing some definite mistakes, that sort of thing.

I am willing to leave this version up, for those who desire to compare between this one and the updated version.

I had fun writing this in the beginning, but then I wanted to go my own way, and then writing episodes out just became more of a chore for me. Coming up with interactions between the characters was somewhat difficult, and not making any bonding that happened feel forced was basically impossible.

In the updated version(which will have a proper name, and art of my OCs hand-drawn by my girlfriend to boot) I will work to address these issues. Constructive criticism is always appreciated, so don't be afraid to tell me what works and what doesn't, and how I might rectify anything. The updated version will also have no set release date, as I want to get chapters made as I get motivation. When It's Done, But Hopefully Soon(tm)

Any complaints you have, or things that bugged you, or things that you felt worked, or anything like that, you can put in the comments.
Signing off for now,
      Jay Linnell, Agent, HDAPA.

P.S. I might pop up a preview of certain additional original characters being added to the story. There might also be some episodes skipped due to lack of interest by me, but we'll see how I feel when we get there.

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