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3rd Place
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Characters: 8/10. I would've liked to know more about Yoongi outside of Jungkook. Most of his conversations revolve around Jungkook and what he's going to do with him. Yoongi briefly mentions his job, but I don't recall seeing specifically what his job is. Jin is given a lot of depth with his past with littles and I really liked him. Jungkook is also given a lot to work with, which is why I would've liked to see a little more for Yoongi. It makes sense that most of his time on screen would revolve around Jungkook, though more heart-to-heart convos and getting a look at who Yoongi is outside of Jungkook could have been beneficial.
I still like Yoongi and all of the characters, it just felt at times that Yoongi wouldn't develop or talk much about anything outside of Jungkook. Even when he does talk about things outside of Jungkook (like work), it's spoken about because it impacts Jungkook. However, all the characters are solid and even though I would've liked to see more of Yoongi outside of Jungkook, he still has identifiable traits that make him stand out.
