-'I turned around only to run into a hard wall. Stumbling backward, the rock of a guy caught me. I looked up into an attractive face.'

"'Are you okay?" the boy asked in an Australian accent.'

Geez, didn't know guys came in rock form now. Where can I get one?

-There's always some kind of memory loss involved. I wish that I could wake up with... NO!

-When the climax is so anticlimatic. Introduced in one chapter solved right away with no struggle whatsoever.

-The entire story is in italics, bold, or all caps with no reason whatsoever.

-"I'm not like all the other girls," she said while putting on high waisted shorts, a crop top, and adjusting her flower crown.

Just keep telling yourself that. Maybe someday it will become true.

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