What this is all about

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by Mothman_connoisseur

by Mothman_connoisseur

Howdy!

So what is happening here is I am doing a rewrite of the original "When did Knights become Couriers?" book. The reason for this is that I feel it could be improved and new ideas popped into my head. Here are some points of what changes might happen as well as what will stay the same.

Changes

1: I just feel like there are many points where things moved too quickly, there wasn't enough of a struggle for Six and I want to make the fight scenes better.

2: I also think I gave Six too many weapons and he didn't use all of them. That seems alright I think.

3: I plan to make Six a bit more "cold" in the sense that he is very cautious around people and doesn't trust people easily as well as make his personality a bit more hardened but still relaxed.

4: I want him to find out more about who he was and the journey along the way and the struggles that come with that.

5: I feel that I should make the time between him arriving in Remnant to arriving in Vale longer so that he can learn about explore and learn about Remnant as he goes along.

6. His age will be kept the same, but I won't make it that he was older and is young again when he returns. I'm just gonna make him 24 years old or so.

7: I'm gonna make it that Six arrives with no companions (sorry Rex and ED-E). I might change this idea but I probably won't. Edit: I have changed my mind Six's companions will slowly arrive in Remnant.

8: The plot will be mostly the same.

Same

1. I'm going to keep his S.P.E.C.I.A.L. stats and perks "mostly" the same. (Minor changes)

2. I'm keeping the idea of him not running out of bullets. This can be explained as he collects used brass and shells and knows how to make gunpowder.

3. I'm sticking to the original pairing of JaunexWinter. No harem.

4. He will still hate Mecha-Shift weapons.

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Other notes

1: Like the previous story this be a betrayed Jaune story. (I like the drama)

2: I'm going to keep it that everyone except Ozpin, JNPR and CFVY "betrayed" Jaune or Six, whatever his name is.

And that's about it

If you have any questions please feel free to send me a message.