───ㅤtake one more step

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REVIEWER: sungielxver

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REVIEWER: sungielxver

CUSTOMER: cassandrejanvier

CUSTOMER: cassandrejanvier

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⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Cover [7/10]

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⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Cover [7/10]

I love the overall vibe of the cover. Especially the characters used for Akhyra and Luciana. The cover is classic barbie / fairytale core and also is kind of like the covers physical books have. It would easily fit into one of my favorite covers of wattpad, if not for a few reasons.

The subtitle of the story which is placed in the spotlight isn't easily visible. The font used for the title is one of the classic canva fonts, and imo this story deserves a better font than that. Your name is also almost squished at the bottom, not leaving a good impression. I also would suggest putting the awards batch on top right of the book. The title needn’t come in between the characters and your name can be comfortably placed at the bottom of the cover, in a thicker font. The subtitle can be completely removed, as well as the wattpad symbol and the novel tag.

However, I am not in the field of graphic designing so feel free to discuss my concerns and your opinions with whoever you decide to get your cover modified from.

⟨ 🪄 ⟩ ── Title [3/5]

I would say the title of the story isn't very relevant in the context that Akhyra and Luciana both encounter a series of troubles one after the other, including their past and present. Hence, they constantly need to take more steps in order to be successful and reach the peaks of their respective careers once again.

𝗠𝗬𝗦𝗧𝗘𝗥𝗜𝗔: 𝗋𝖾𝗏𝗂𝖾𝗐 𝖼𝖺𝗌𝗍𝗅𝖾 . ☄ .  [CLOSED]Where stories live. Discover now