I finished the book and I think it is much better although still not very good level. It took me a long time but it is over and thank you again for reading.
This book is a trash. I don't even say it because I hate the way it was written, but it is my first book, written in a translator with an idea that was created when I was probably very sad and tired.Okay, so let's keep it simple.
Viera character...7/10 It's very ok for me. I really liked the idea of a lost child in his own mind trying to lose his humanity due to his anti-social nature after being neglected by his parents. Manipulated by a genius, trying to break free from his own thoughts at the end and revealing a human who is already dead but still exists inside.
Plot...5,5/10 The plot was written in my head with chapters, so it was bad, but readable.
Writing style..3/10 It could be worse, it could be better. Lots of mistakes, inaccuracies, limited vocabulary, bad dialogues, missing descriptions, sometimes too fast action.
[You can reat on your own]
At the end, it took me a really long time to write because the holidays came, I got lazy, I also had to repair myself after the school year and well...
After I realized how bad this book is. So if you're reading this, congratulations and I'll tell you right away, I won't fix this one - I'll write a new one, similar but better planned, later.
That's all, thank you very, vey very much..and take care of yourself, bye!
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My art of Viera btw.
I used some base from Gin and then I drew the rest with other references, but this is probably my first profile drawing that looks ok. [Nu-uh] I tried to keep the original anime style, maybe a bit of manga, but I'm not a very good artist. Something still doesn't suit me about this face, Viera looks a bit too adult. [According to the description, she should have a rounder face and a longer nose.] This mouse is fucking good, I love it>>
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I'm autistic, probably dyslexic, dysgraphic, probably mentally ill, silly billy and need some meds so don't question anything that happened in this book just accept the fact that the world is going to end in millions of years! ( ＾ω＾)
