Hello
This is a reflection of my book. It's my first one and in some ways it was better than i ever imagined it would be and in some ways it was worse.While my story may be better than other writers, that's just because I used spell check on it.
My plot is cliche, and has been done many times before. It was pridictable, and the story was rushed in some parts and i think way to slow in others. My last chapter was the worse. I didn't know how to end the story so i threw it all into one chapter what should have been two or three.
My characters were all over the place and didn't have a set peronality. Their love was underdeveloped and unrealistic.
In conclusion this isn't a good story, but as i said befor it's my first. My goal wasn't a good story but to see if i could write one at all and my goal was accomplish no matter how bad it is. I still might go back into the story and try to save it so if you have any suggestions i'm happy to take them.
Thankyou for reading my story.
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Fey Academy
FantasiFey Academy. A school created for the coexistence of humans and fey (Fairies), but the humans don't know this. To them it's just a private academy who separates it's kids into two different dorm, Fey and others. After her parents die in a freak acci...
