Now i have found a BIG recourse to help find these marysues... called the 'big book of mary-sues' made by Kitti on the website quotev so credits too them!
Ah, one classic of a marysue....one very loved and recognisable now, lets see what we are working with
Now she is a danganronpa OC which i am NOT familiar with tho i do know some of it, i only know up to the 3rd execution from the first game and by the names i am seeing on here its not the first game so i will noot be making this a fandom OC! (sowwy :c) mainly because she is a vampire also isn't there already an ultimate singer in the first game? Or did society just replace her that quickly? But anyways, ON WITH THE RE-DO!Now this oc has a few things about her that are...interesting and on the website we find out more things out things about her but they are just about danganronpa so i'll skip over that
Ok now can we address the fact she thinks we think shes gay just because of her rainbows???like WHAT just for that we'll be making sure she gets that sorted out...
NEXT!! The main thing about her is she is a vampire, thats kinda well....BORING so let's say that she isnt just a NORMAL vampire but a MAGICAL GIRL VAMPIRE!!!(a villain of course) and in the future we might make a group to be the heros! And see who wins >:3 this also helps with her edgy insane side and together we can figure out why she is like dis! It does say that all the guys like her so maybe her powers could link to love, and because of her name being Angel she could be misleading to the reader at first that also links into her 'nice at first but she has a secret creepy side!' Thing she has going on
And whats a magical girl without a neko demon thing? So i went on a mission to find ANOTHER marysue that was an animal
And then i found sarah,
She was a sweet, shy, quiet little neko demon! She was a undertale OC tho...so we did need to remove it but i will still keep parts of it, like the fact she was abandoned and adopted and the fact her eyes can glow red! Also because Angel is 16-18 bc she is in V3 of Danganronpa I thought it was a good idea too make her 16 so her and Sarah can have a 2 year age gap, now STORY TIME >:DWhen angel was around 4 there was a knock at the door, her mother let her answer it and when she opened the door she saw a sweet little kitten on the ground as she picked it up, the little kitten turned human it was (platonic) love at first sight blah blah blah later on they were playing in the woods and angel was attacked by a vampire, went hospital and became vampy then something happened and now they villains, thats the main story I haven't came up with a reason for why they are villians because i want that too be a thing we can do in the future with MORE marysues!!(and anti-sues)
Now, ON WITH THE REDESIGNS!!!
I didnt put them in villain costumes yet bc i feel like it would have to match with hero costumes and we dont have the heros yet SOOOOO its just this for nowPS i was REALLY bored while drawing and was procrastinating so it didn't turn our how i would like it, mainly in the outfits so sowwy!!
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Q: which is better? Mary-sues or Anti-sues?
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Mary-sue rehabilitation/redesign
RandomTo learn what a marysue is I have another book to explain it!! Rehab for marysues AND antisues to be beautiful and amazing OCs!!!(btw i will only do mary sues that are JOKE marysues that are genuine will NOT get in this book)