(TW IN THIS CHAPTER THERE ARE MENTIONS OF ABUSE THOSE NOT TOO EXTREME OF COURSE BUT STILL!!)
Before you ask, no this is sadly NOT ebony as in the goth harry potter fan fiction :c
This is a sonic oc that looks like this
Yeah, a REAL edge ball anyways things about her:Everyone has a crush on her but she likes shadow
Enemies are every female every bc they are quote on quote 'sl7ts' but especially Amy Rose
Powers are mind reading, physic powers, fire powers, water powers and she can talk to animals
Backstory is that she was made by egghead dude in an underwater volcano lab that no one knows about for some reason then she ran away and met sonic and his friends and then started living with them
She likes chocolate, anime, pocky, darkness
She does NOT like sunshine, rainbows, girls, mean ppl, rude ppl (💀), most people in general
Her personality is that shes quiet and loud, anti social, smart and calm, crazy and is shy
Funfacts she can speak Japanese, she has a demonic form, her birthday is on October 31 AKA Halloween and she has a scar, uhh somewhere ig?
Now, ON WITH THE REDO!!
(BTW she will still be a sonic oc!!)
First we will NOT tolerate girl slander in this asylum- uh i mean rehabilitation...
So lets just say she just doesn't have many girl friends but thats it, NO GIRL HATE INVOLVED >:(
And you know what? Because she was so rude about it i'm making her a KISSGIRL!Next lets make that scar visible, we can figure that out later tho :3 (it's completely fine too have a scar on a character that isn't visible but i think on this little edge lord it would be edgyier too make it visible)
Now shes loud and quiet so lets chose one now which is quiet, most of the time, maybe when mad she will get loud and will respond with yelling and shouting at the person annoying her, i like to think she gets annoyed at rlly small things like ppl interrupting her or chewing with their mouth open
And with all those powers? We gonna have to get rid of those all and maybe recycle one or two later but we'll see!!
Anyways, her name is just rust now!!(bc we will NOT tolerate that Ebony disrespect!!)
Now i think it would make sense for her to be an edgy tough loner on the outside but a sweet anime loving weeb on the inside!
Another thing is in alot of marysue fanfics the characters are in a school setting so i wanna make her go to a private school bc i want more private school badass girls in fanfic! :0
Theirs not much else but ig we can still give her dat scar
And i think it just makes sense to make sure she has a cool weapon but u know what? How about bc shes a robot we make her have a cool spiked bat!! (But im not drawing that 0.0)
And now for moment you've been waiting for!! ON WITH THE REDO!
I know shes going to a private skool but i ended up putting her in her outside of school outfit
And srry i took such a long break like....a REALLY long break 0.0 i just kinda forgot about this because no one talks about marysues anymore and i thought i should actually come back to this, especially since its almost October and with October comes Cringetober !!
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Q: whats your favourite type of Marysue?
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Mary-sue rehabilitation/redesign
CasualeTo learn what a marysue is I have another book to explain it!! Rehab for marysues AND antisues to be beautiful and amazing OCs!!!(btw i will only do mary sues that are JOKE marysues that are genuine will NOT get in this book)