New Update: But DON'T Panic, This Isn't Over Yet!

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Okay so... I know I said I'd finish this version of the story before posting/working on the new version. But, when I returned to the ending of this story, I remembered why I couldn't bring myself to finish it.

The ending just doesn't tie the story together in a way I feel satisfied with. The side romances are left unresolved, or are resolved in a way that leaves a bitter taste in my mouth. And just in general, the ending I wrote feels a little forced. It doesn't flow well.

So I'm sorry, but I'm discontinuing this version of the story. I just don't feel motivated enough to finish it.

BUT, update with the new version: As soon as this chapter is posted, I will actively be working on posting the first chapter of Underneath the Moonlight: REBOOT!

I don't wanna spoil too much before the release of this book, but I did want to introduce the biggest changes to this story:

First off: Athena Akiyama. Her appearance has changed completely, for plot reasons that will be revealed in the prologue.

 Her appearance has changed completely, for plot reasons that will be revealed in the prologue

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(for reference, this is a picrew I made with Athena and Osorō in mind.)

Second off: Aru Akiyama. You read that right, Aru Akiyama. Athena now has a younger half-brother, younger by a year and a half, also for plot reasons.

 Athena now has a younger half-brother, younger by a year and a half, also for plot reasons

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(for reference, this is a picrew I made with Aru and Osorō in mind.)

Third off: Athena's biggest untold backstory with Kyle Sterling, her first boyfriend. The entire prologue is basically all about him (and the Akiyama family in general), so finally, his history and past relationship with Athena Akiyama will be revealed. And guys, believe me, y'all better buckle up... because their love story is one HELL of a rollercoaster, told entirely in 3rd person during the prologue, which is split into four parts.

(... you were expecting me to insert a picrew with Kyle Sterling for reference, weren't you? But nah... I can't spoil that much for you guys ;) you'll have to wait for his introduction first.)

And lastly... when the REAL story finally begins, keep in mind that Athena's first week at Akademi Academy is now the same as Ayano's first week. This means that Athena now has the opportunity to meet certain characters sooner than expected, as well as other rivals she never met in the story's first version...

Get ready y'all. Athena and Osorō WILL return, in ways you've never seen them before.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/370904621-underneath-the-moonlight-reboot-osor%C5%8D-shidesu-x-oc

(Link to story ^ lol)

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