Comments :: This chapter vividly captures the charm of Beijing during Chinese New Year and introduces a warm family dynamic. The unexpected encounter with a stranger in Hoeseok’s room adds an intriguing twist. However, it could benefit from tighter editing for conciseness. Overall, it’s engaging but slightly lengthy.
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Comments :: This introduction sets up an intriguing mystery with Jeon Jungkook and Yoon Haena, who must uncover their mothers' secrets despite their mutual dislike. The premise is compelling and promises emotional depth, but it feels more like a synopsis than an engaging start. A direct scene or character interaction would enhance reader engagement. Overall, it's promising but could use a stronger hook.
