The length and timeline of the epilogue were perfect.
Closure: 8.5/10
Again as this is a series I can't expect the first book to wind everything up but it ended on a good note for the second book, setting up enough anticipation. Great job!
Reader's satisfaction: 10/10
I loved how it ended. It made me excited for the second book. I'll be looking forward to it.
Total: 47.5/50
Extra: I love the way you write! I love your book. It is safe to say I was engaged. You can literally publish this as a paperback. Keep writing!
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