Comments :: The dialogues are outstanding! They are very realistic, interesting, and contribute significantly to the story's overall appeal. Excellent work in making the conversations feel authentic and captivating.
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Comments :: The dialogue writing is very realistic, interesting, and well-crafted. The conversations are engaging and hold the reader's interest effectively. Great job in creating believable and compelling dialogue.
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Comments :: The dialogue is very engaging, flowing, and natural. It maintains a captivating pace and never becomes boring. Excellent work in crafting conversations that feel authentic and hold the reader's attention throughout.
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Comments :: While the dialogues are not entirely realistic, they are still quite engaging and effective. The conversations could use a bit more authenticity, but overall, the dialogue writing is solid and contributes well to the narrative.
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Comments :: The repetition of words in the dialogues seems forced, which disrupts the flow of conversation. While the dialogues are somewhat natural and engaging, there is significant room for improvement to make them more fluid and less repetitive.
Book name :: Cosmogyral Expedition (volume 1)
Author :: CassyKnight_21
Scores :: 0/10
Comments :: Not available for review as the story has been removed or deleted
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