{Keeri}✨ Rising Moon

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🍓If you're looking for an enthralling read that combines mystery, romance and the supernatural, then dive into Rising Moon (The Nirvana Academy) that's perfectly filled with well-developed characters and unexpected twists. You won't be able to put your device down. Don't miss out on this incredible book!🍓

🍓Cover: 4.7/5

•The cover is visually appealing and effectively captures the fantasy elements of the book. It's really beautiful, especially the image of the wolf, which is quite attractive and hints at the werewolf genre, featuring one of our main characters, 'Kisha Locklear' with a moon behind him.
•The title of the book, the name of the academy and a descriptive phrase about it are clearly visible, along with the author's name at the bottom.
•Adding a lighting effect to the wolf's icy blue eyes could enhance its perfection even more. However, I did feel that a different font type could have been chosen.
•Overall, it's a stunning cover! Well done, author! ✨

🍓Title: 4/5

•The title 'Rising Moon (Nirvana Academy)' is intriguing and memorable.
•However, I felt that it didn't quite align with the entire plot of the story.
•From my perspective, "Rising Moon" suggests the idea of Kisha transforming into a werewolf under a rising moon. At least, that's the impression I got.
•But I'm unsure about the true intention behind the title.
•I'm not saying "Rising Moon" doesn't fit the plot, but considering the amazing story the book presents, the title could be more fitting to the overall concept. ✨

🍓Blurb: 3.5/5

•The blurb is somewhat vague and could better outline the main conflict and stakes.
•However, it does pique interest about the academy.
•I believe the author could delve deeper into the plot, providing more depth and hinting at the relationship between the characters Crescent and Kisha.
•Introducing a bit more about these two main characters could make the blurb more intriguing.
•Overall, it effectively introduces the prestigious Nirvana Academy, revealing some of its secrets and what truly happens within its walls.✨

🍓Character Development: 5/5

•The characters are well-developed, each with distinct personalities and growths.
•If I could give the book more scores, I would give it a perfect hundred score in this category because it truly deserves it.
•I haven't encountered any other book where the author effectively portrays the development and personalities of each character as well as in this one.
•The character development of Kisha and Crescent is particularly well-written, with their feelings and personalities becoming clearer with each chapter. It's beautifully crafted, with well-defined characters.
•I want to highlight that the author took great care in naming all the characters with beautiful names, even providing pronunciations along with them.
•In my experience and even in my own writing, I haven't seen such thorough portrayal of character traits and personalities.
•The character chapter in the book is essential for readers to deeply understand each character easily. As the chapters progress, their emotions and development are easily understood.
•Honestly, I have nothing negative to say. It's truly wonderful how well the author portrayed them.
•I've learned a lot from her on how to introduce and develop everyone effectively.
•If she were here with me, I would praise her endlessly for crafting such beautiful characters with unique names and personalities, along with their well-paced development. Really, the author has done a great job. 👏👏👏

🍓Plot: 9.5/10

•The plot is engaging with several interesting twists.
•Among the werewolf genre fanfiction books I've read, yours stands out as exceptionally well-written.
•It effectively combines mystery, romance, dark romance, erotica, and smut, which was impressive. However, I felt that the pacing of the first mature scenes in the opening chapter was a bit slow. But the mature content in the upcoming chapters was well-executed.
•Regarding Nirvana Academy, it's a well-crafted plot full of mysteries within the academy.
•The unfolding events kept me captivated throughout each chapter. But I did feel like at some places, it could have been less cryptic.
•As I said before, I initially plan to read up to 15 chapters if the book I get had more than 30 chapters, but with yours, I found myself drawn in and couldn't stop reading until I reached the 32nd chapter, it was that good! The entire plot is truly interesting, and I thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of it! Good job with coming with an interesting plot like this, author!✨👏

🍓Grammar/Vocabulary: 8.8/10

•The writing is grammatically well-written with a rich vocabulary that enhances the story very well.
•However, even though you mentioned that some mistakes were intentionally made, as a writer and reviewer, I couldn't overlook the numerous grammatical mistakes I came across.
•There were many instances where there were switches between the tenses.
•For example, in the first chapter, there's a line like:

"Kisha would turn on his heels and began walking away, never minding Saikai's unhappiness."

•Throughout the book, like the above line, I noticed future tenses used instead of past tenses in several places. I initially thought this issue would resolve in the early chapters, but it persisted throughout the entire book.
•This inconsistency can confuse readers about whether a scene has already occurred or will happen in the future. Additionally, there were instances of sudden shifts to present tense within past tense narratives.
•I hope the author addresses these issues and maintains consistency with the tenses in her future books.
•There were also several grammatical mistakes where sentences were split incorrectly.
•However, what truly impressed me was the author's talent in portraying the emotions of the characters using a rich vocabulary.
•I was truly impressed because the emotional impact was portrayed well with phrases that nearly touched my heart.
•The author's use of rich and beautiful vocabulary throughout the story was exceptional and greatly enhanced the reading experience. It was really beautiful! It was a great reading experience for me! ✨✨✨

🍓Overall Impression: 9.8/10

•Overall, the book is a compelling read with strong characters and an engaging plot. It has minor issues but is highly enjoyable.
•If this book were recommended for purchase, I would gladly buy it and recommend it to anyone I know.
•I cannot emphasize enough how amazing it was. I'm still in awe of many moments where the plot was particularly engaging and the emotions of the characters were portrayed well.
•I was so engrossed that I felt like I would read everything continuously without a break, even if it meant being glued to my computer or phone all day. Haha, lol. 😆 You know what? That's exactly what happened! I was glued to my devices for several days, switching from my phone to my computer and vice-versa, devouring each chapter.
•I want to say that you've done a fantastic job with this book, author. Congratulations on the hard work you've clearly put into it. Well done! 💕

🍓Final marks : 45.3/50

🍓Last note:

For your expectation that you mentioned, that is, you were expecting some constructive criticism to help you understand and see your flaws. Here's my answer:

•I didn't really see any significant flaws in this book. However, I did feel that some parts could be made less cryptic.
•But in my opinion, this didn't affect the overall quality of the book. So, I assure you there's nothing you should worry about in terms of flaws because the whole book is well-plotted and well-constructed.

Regarding the pointers you mentioned about the plot, characters, how well they are portrayed, and my overall enjoyment of this book, I want to tell you:

•From the bottom of my heart, the whole book was fantastic and perfectly suited my taste.
•If I ever decide to write a book involving werewolves, your book is the one I would take inspiration from. The characters, the plot, the enjoyment, everything was excellently presented, and I thoroughly enjoyed every aspect.

Reviewer : Yoonkeeri
Author of the book : Nikachu22

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