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{Keeri}✨ Unexpected Teenage

🍓Dive into "Unexpected Teenage"! It's filled with intriguing elements and captivating love triangle!!! Happy reading!🍓

🍓Title : 4.5/5

•The title “Unexpected Teenage” is pretty good.
•It's unique and stands out from other book titles easily.
•The title is really memorable. It's short, simple, yet impactful. It makes it not only easy to remember but also intriguing enough to capture potential readers' attention.
•It might imply that the teenage years did not go as planned and were marked by unexpected twists and turns which exactly happened to Yeha in the story.
•But I do suggest adding, ‘our’ or ‘my’ to the title, like - ‘My unexpected teenage’ referring to Yeha’s life or ‘Our unexpected teenage’ referring to all four important characters of the story. But still, it's merely my opinion. And the author doesn't really have to note it up if she doesn't like it.

🍓Cover : 5/5

•This type of cover is something I really love.
•It doesn't have too many descriptive elements that are hard to see, nor is it too plain.
•It's bright, simple, yet appealing. I don't know about other readers, but since I love this type of cover, I don't have much to say. Though, it might vary from different readers' perspectives.
•The first cover you had was actually pretty good too, but it felt like it had 2000s vibes and didn't relate much to the story which is set in 2024. But the current cover is really bright and good at grabbing attention.
•The title is well noticeable, with the font looking good and the author's name is visible enough to see. The girl on the cover represents Yeha. It's all good. Good job! 💓

🍓Blurb : 1/5

•I feel like the blurb could have been better written. Let me point out the original one below.
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"For the people, who are struggling with thier teen life."

A 17 year old korean girl school student experiences some unexpected events in her life including love and family. Who will she choose? Nam Seon Ho or Kim Jesper. Will she be able to save her parents? And find the truth?

Chapter 13 preview --

"Dance with me as if the world doesn't exist" Jesper added.

The romantic ambiance was enhanced by the calming melody that enveloped the air. All eyes were fixed on us as we gracefully glided across the floor. Suddenly, Jesper gently tugged me back, and I found myself safely nestled in his embrace.

*THIS NOVEL IS USES THE 'KONGLISH' LANGUAGE*

GO AHEAD AND OPEN THE PAGES OF MOOH YE-HA'S LIFE.
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•First, let's see the spelling mistakes.

"For the people, who are struggling with thier teen life” - here, it should be ‘their’ and then, “Who will she choose? Nam Seon Ho or Kim Jesper.” - Here, adding a question mark at the end will be more good, like : “Who will she choose? Nam Seon Ho or Kim Jesper?”

"Dance with me as if the world doesn't exist" Jesper added. - Here, adding a comma after ‘exist’ will make the blurb look more professional. Like - "Dance with me as if the world doesn't exist," Jesper added.

*THIS NOVEL IS USES THE 'KONGLISH' LANGUAGE* - Here, ‘is’ shouldn't be added, and instead, it should be, *This Novel Uses The 'Konglish' Language*

•Now, let's talk about the actual issue. I feel like the blurb could have been written much better considering how amazing the plot of the story is. The current one, if I have to be honest with you as a reviewer, isn't making me interested enough to come and read the book.