Kokujin no tenkousei-Hiroki and the SBG gang

episode 10:inner demons

So. I just found out that Hiroki was 12 after my friend, who is my editor, love that women with my heart, read a redidt article and found out that the author even admits it. So not only are Nao and Hiroki 12, that would make Ayumu 11 and Kanoko just a few years older then them, probably just entered her teen phase.

So not only is Kokujin, who is probably older than them by the looks of it, which in turn makes me question what the fuck the author was smoking, but he basically raped and slept with minors. And in turn that would make Kaede a pedo due to her being a full grown women with two kids....

Whe the fuck do these dounjin authors be eatin, smoking, breathing and drinking?? Because. WHAT THE FUCK!

Obviously I had to Age up Hiroki and the rest of those hoes up a bit. Meaning in this universe Hiroki was on the cusp of being 14/15 at the time of his death and later on resurrection which further means that this shit, in this fanfiction, has been going for over 2 and a half years....

I hate myself so much rn. So I just made this shit worse! I need to take a walk, enjoy the chapter. MY GOD I HATE YOU, NTR AND MYSELF, EDITOR!

3RD PERSON POV:Kanoko worked hard on the farm, as usual, ever since her snap at Kasumi she's been less talkative and put all her effort into the farm and whenever she wasn't working on the crops she was in her room looking at old photos of her brother and father

Kanoko honestly wished she could turn back time. Back to when everything was so simple. So easy. A time when her brother was with her or when her father was around. Although she vaguely remembers her biological father, she ended up hating him once he cheated on her mother in their own home. She hated him more than anything and she held that same hatred for her step-father until he showed his loyalty and fatherly love to her

And since then she's seen him as her own father rather than a step-father. Then the day happened when Hiroki was born, and everything changed, she swore she wouldn't be like her father. That she would stand by her brothers side and would protect him till the day she dies. Until the day he came along, that's when everything fell apart. She found herself hooked, even though it wasn't that when she first did it with Kokujin. If anything, the teen forced himself onto her, raping Kanoko in a karaoke bar, and instead of taking it to, oh I don't know, the AUTHORITIES!

She instead went back to the man who raped her and in turn made herself think she did it with consent. Even after Kokujin constantly asked for them to say how good he was in comparison to Hiroki and his father, and they didn't question it and went along just so that they could feel more pleasure from him

(on, God I wanna slap this girl with a Hispanic back hand so bad rn)

However she can't turn back the cruel hands of time to she just has to sit with her actions to her flesh and blood. Much like her mother, and much like Kaede she decided to go outside for some air. Kanoko however instead of walking around aimlessly walked towards the one place she couldn't face for the longest time-

Hiroki's gravesight.

However just as she neared the cemetery the air suddenly got colder. The closer she got the more uncomfortable she became, as if something was following her, watching her from the trees. She felt like someone was breathing down her neck, but brushed it off