Chapter 4

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Please judge the story after reading the first 6 chapters!!!

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Please read Chapter 3 before reading this.

The response I get for the first chapter and prologue is not getting for chapter 2 and 3.

What happened guys? Is the story getting bored. Or are guys not happy with the plot.

Then please let me know guys. I am investing so much time for drafting each chapters. Definitely writing is my passion, and I am using this opportunity for that. But the reduced number of votes and reads is really discouraging me.

Anything, you can convey to me. I will try to rectify it.

Thank you ❤️

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The next day morning at the parking area.

(Kavya and Varun stood there leaning on to their bike chatting about some random things, while waiting for Vishal. Soon Vishal arrived there in his bike and parked it. The duo greeted him, while Vishal greeted back only Kavya. Kavya was noticing their cold behaviour from the previous day, but she decided to not dwell into it further. But now she know that she has to interfer in this and have to handle this man childs carefully.)

Kavya: "Nee yenda late innekku?"

Vishal: "Amma ikku konjam odambu mudiyala dii, atha ella velayum clear pannittu vara vendiyatha irundhichu."

Varun: "Appo nee yethukku daa vandha, avanga kooda irukka vendiyathu thaane?"

Vishal: "Enakku theriyum enna pannanumnnu nee sollatha yen kitta. Yen amma thaane naa paathukkiren." (Varun's heart felt heavy hearing his rude words.)

Varun: "Macha naa...."

Vishal: "Hmm sorry Varun, romba tensiona irundhichu athaa, I am extremely sorry. Naa pakkathu veettu Aunty kitta sollittu thaa vandhen, yethunnalum avanga call pannuvan."

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