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Guys why none of you had not understood what I actually wanted to say,.
Was my language that hard to understand.?
I wrote in a simple english phir bhi..

I cleary said the new story will be on AvNeil in a dark way with Neil's dark side,.
but it will be a Sequel to my old story that's it.
I said cleary it's a traingle love story in a Mafia backdrop in Neil's dark side.
Still if you guys didn't understood how come the story will be....
I will try to update Prolouge.
Anytime...
Reading that share the views atleast then.

If not....
As No one doesn't want any new story though it is on AvNeil I will let it go.
For this one story only no one is appreciating, encouraging me than how come I even imagine and even expect you guys will encourage me for new Story.
It's ok...it's my bad.
Waise mujhe aap sab ka ye ignorance ka adat hogai hai.

Itne sare readers hai par sirf teen logo ne response ki aur baki toh chodiya...
like koi lena dena nahi hai mujhe ye topic se...
aur jo comment ki wo sab ko bhi sirf "Vivah" story chahiye,..toh let it be.

Atleast ye story ko promote karke appreciate karo...
for God grace answer me one thing
sab ko encourage karke mujhe kyun road pe akela chodeta hai aap sab ?.
Sab ko ek jagah aur main ek jagah...
shame on yourself People,.grow up.
......

Story continous...,

2:00pm,
Khanna office.
Neil's cabin.
After having a full pledge meals in a well known restuarant,
Neil introducing his Love and Life to whole employees.
Everyone congratulating Avni for her success,.
Praising her for the beauty with brains
she is...
Avni feeling shy listening they praises so much,.
she hide in Neil's arms blushing.
Smiling looking at Avni,.
holding her hand dispersing everyone,
Neil brought Avni back to his cabin.
As his cabin is very vast
Couches all around,.
Neil sat on couch after lossing his tie
holding Avni hand
who is still holding his hand but didn't sat beside him,.
Giggling while removing his hand,.
From her hold
Avni removing her sandles sat straight on his lap wrapping her legs around him
making Neil to laugh
at her.
Classping his hands around her waist,.
Neil layed down on his back taking her totally on him.

Neil :- Kya hui mera Jaan ko., itna kyun sharma rahi ho Bachcha.

Avni :-  Toh main kya karunnn...sab toh itni taariph  kiya tha meri,.mujhe sharam agai.
Kabi koi nahi ki thi na.

Neil :- Acha.
Kabi koi bhi taariph nahi ki tumhe ?
Ye kaise hui...

Avni :-  Ha sab log mujhe bachpan se sirf khoobsurat hone ki taariph ki par padhai pe nahi.
Bachpan pe toh mujhe itni gussa ati thi ki sab pe....ye kehna chahti thi main...ki
Main sirf khoobsurat nahi hun, par smart bhi hun.
Par kabi nahi keh payi,...finally aaj aapki wajahse mere wo dream puri hui hai.

Hearing her at start Neil smiled but later
he glared at him,.
Getting no response from Neil,
frowning Avni looked at him lifting
her head from his chest.

Avni :- Kya hui,.!
Aise kyun dekh raha hai aap mujhe ?

Neil :- .....

He glared her more instead of answering her innocent question,.
In a swift he made Avni lie on couch
and he hovered over her.

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