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Guys...I am only giving 50-votes as target to complete why is that this difficult for 200+ readers to achive the target...!!
Why ??
Am already asking very less and giving only 1/4 as the target...yet
50 votes bhi nahi de raha hai aap log phir main kya hi bolunn yaar... bahut hogai aap sab ka.

50 fucking votes can't you give me atleast that when I am working this hard only for you all...
Now I am confused.. Why do I really have to update every damn week twice only for 30 to 40 voters....why is that ??
Is that even neccessary for me ?!
I don't think so.
If you don't listen to me then why should I listen to you all and give updates ??
Why ?

Whats the problem to vote when the story is good to read ?
Can anyone of silent readers please atleast say whats your problem in voting and sharing the review.???

Do you guys know how many hours par a day I need to think just to write one damn update.
Writing is not easy,...if you guys have that much aducity to ignore me then just do me a favour by writting one normal chapter
on any Couple and show me.
Then you might understand How hard it is to pen a Chapter,..that to with not one thousand but freaking 5-thousands words.

I am really fed up by your guys lack of response and appreciation.
Having mistakes in languge, having some editing mistakes...thats quite common when you spend much time on phone your eyes automatically reduces its refelctions,..which lead to mistakes.
For that I can't edit twice or thrice leaving my other works where I am not even getting a single Peace or Appreciation from other silent readers ,...,

I am really fed up by saying in every chapters about these things,..yet The result is always Zero.
How can all of you be this Heartless .??
All you guys know only to ignore the words, read the chapter and flew away.
Just like that...kyunki dard aur hardwork aapka nahi hai na.
.......

Story continues...,

The same day,
Night time
Abhimanyu room,
12:00am.
Sitting in porch swing
infront of the lappy Abhimanyu wearing headphones
Is watching
the wedding video of Avni and Neil.
He is having a smile on his face,
Seeing the Haldi of Avni,
Her happiness yet again.
Don't know till date how many times he had watched the video,
Seen wedding album.

Today he is very happy that he spend most of the day with his sister after days,..
but also
sad at the end of the day thinking
that.,
The surprise he had planned to give
Avni tomorrow was spoiled by
Neil.

Knowing Avni broke her phone,
Abhimanyu had ordered a new Samsung Flip phone for her,
But before that
Neil had already surprised her with all the
Apple produts.
He don't know what to do with the already ordered phone now,
It already got delivered to him.

Neela
who passed by Abhimanyu room
seeing lights are still on in his room,
keeping the bottle on table,
Which she fleched from kitchen,
went towards
Abhimanyu room.
Sensing Neela touch on his shoulders Abhimanyu smiled seeing her,.
Sitting beside Abhimanyu on Swing,
Neela smiled seeing her Daughter's wedding video.,
Yet again.
Where now
Sangeet video is playing.

Neela :-  Phirse dekh raha hai tum Avii ki wedding video ko.

Abhimanyu :- Kya karun Maa,jitne baar bhi dekhun...aise lag tha hai ki, kal hi hui hai Avii ki shaadi .
Kal hi wo apni Sasural gai hai,.par sach toh kuch aur hi hai.

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