[Fairy In The Forest] By Minutestory017

part 65

As they charged towards the gates, a hail of arrows and bombs unleashed upon them, making every step a perilous dance with death. Despite their valiant efforts, the soldiers found it impossible to breach the gate, every attempt repelled by a withering barrage of steel and fire. Sallah kum approached Mike, who stood with his hands clasped behind his head, his face etched with despair. "Our foes have secured every inch of the gate," Mike growled, "their archers poised to strike at every turn. Edward's metal monstrosities are decimating our ranks, leaving our soldiers broken and bleeding. Even if we managed to break through, it would take over 10 hours, and at what cost? The slaughter would be catastrophic. I will not stand idly by while my men are butchered." Sallah kum's voice cut through the din, "Then what will you do, Master?"

The group stood in tense silence, each lost in thought, searching for a solution to their dire predicament. Suddenly, Blezi shifted, her voice barely above a whisper. "I might have a way... but I'm not sure it'll work as you hope."
Mike's eyes snapped to hers, his grip on her arms tightening as he urged, "Tell me!" His gaze burned with intensity, searching hers for any glimmer of hope.
Blezi swallowed hard, her words spilling out in a rush. "Remember the hidden paths we used when I escaped the palace? Those narrow tunnels... I didn't mention them earlier because I doubted they'd be large enough for our needs."
Mike's eyes widened, his hands slowly releasing their grip on her arms as the possibility dawned on him.
"You're right, Enasthum mentioned those hidden paths to me as well," Jake said, his voice filled with conviction. "We should utilize them, Mike. It's our only viable option." Mike nodded in agreement, "I'll lead a team of 30 soldiers, with 15 entering initially." He turned to Lake, "Bring them to me, Lake." Lake nodded and swiftly exited the chamber.

Blezi stepped forward, her voice tinged with concern, "What about me? Are you going alone?" Mike reassured her, "No, Lake and I will lead the first group. Sallah kum will command the remaining soldiers, securing our perimeter." Sallah kum acknowledged the order, "As you wish, my Lord."

Mike turned to Blezi, "You'll join us with Uncle Jake and the remaining 15 soldiers." Blezi nodded softly, her voice barely audible, "Okay."

Mike's expression turned somber as he embraced Blezi, kissing her head in a gentle gesture. But with the weight of responsibility settling upon him, he knew he couldn't linger. With a resolute nod, he exited the chamber, leaving Blezi and Jake standing together in contemplative silence.

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Here's a rewritten version with a more polished tone and no changes to the original meaning:

As Mike's team emerged from the hidden passage, they launched a surprise attack on the soldiers within. The sudden assault from within caught the soldiers off guard, leaving them stunned and disoriented. Chaos erupted as the soldiers struggled to comprehend the unexpected turn of events, unsure which direction to focus their attention. Mike's soldiers had infiltrated the palace, while Sallah kum's forces continued to besiege the exterior.

Meanwhile, Queen Eliana sat confidently on her throne, convinced that Mike's forces would never penetrate the palace walls. However, her serenity was short-lived, as frantic soldiers burst into her chambers, bearing urgent news.

"What?!" she exclaimed, her voice laced with shock and disbelief. "How did he manage to breach our defenses?"

The soldier trembled, "I-I don't know, Your Highness. But we've witnessed him engaging our men in the garden. He's already made it this far!"

Edward's face contorted in disbelief. "This can't be possible!" he exclaimed, his voice echoing through the halls. The Queen and Edward rushed out to survey the chaos, their eyes widening as they took in the scene before them. Mike's soldiers were clashing with their own army, the sound of steel ringing out as the two forces met.