This story takes place in the universe of 40k. The only major difference is that all primarchs are female.
Y/n is the recently installed commissar for the Astra Militarum Armageddon Steel Legion. He sees his fellow men die by the thousands due to...
Vulkan sits in her tent. It was large but scarcely furnished. Vulkan had given up much of her amenities so that her Legion could be given more beds and tents.
She was reviewing the battle plans when a voice from out
?: Permission to enter?
Vulkan: Granted
Open the tent, and walking in is one of her space marines
Space Marine: I come with some troubling news
Vulkan: What might that be?
Space Marine: There are talks between the guards' men. They seem to be planning something. Talking about some new weapons that will change the battle in their favor tomorrow
Vulkan: My son, we did just arrive at the battle. They're probably referring to us
Space Marine: I'm unsure
Vulkan: Relax, there is no need to be worrying yourself with such things. Rest, you will need for the day ahead
Elsewhere
Y/n: So this is the solution to our armor problem?
Engineer: Yeah, we call it the Tesla Canon. Only cause the other guys *looks at colleagues* said I couldn't call it the bologna mist maker 500
Y/n: *laughing* As long as it works, I don't care what you call it. Just make sure each Enclave squad has one
Engineer: Yes, sir
Y/n retires to his tent to get some sleep, but it does not come easy. He was nervous as if all his work which he had invested months into would go up in smoke and, more importantly , how the primarch would react when they went along with their plan
Next day on the battlefield
Vulkan and her divisions had left to play their part of the plan. Now, all we had to do was sit and wait.... If only they knew
Y/n stands in his trench, and he begins to walk down the line to address the standing soldiers
Y/n: This is our moment, our moment to prove ourselves to the masses. The Empress's angels are here, but they will not be the hero's of the day. IT WILL BE YOU MEN AND WOMEN OF ARMAGEDDON WHO WILL BE THE HEROES! IT WILL BE YOU WHO WILL HAVE YOUR NAMES BE REMEMBERED! NOW WE MUST GO FOR THE EMPRESS!
Soldiers: FOR THE EMPRESS!
All the soldiers begin to leap from their trenches on to war warren ground with the Enclave soldiers leading the way
Y/n run amongst the troops as explosions from dug in enemy armor begin to rock the battlefield. He spots a tank using a blown out wall as cover
Y/n: FIRE AT THAT TANK
One of the Enclave soldiers stopped to aim at the tank. With a pull of his trigger a bolt of lightning shot out of the Tesla Canon and struck dead center where it vaporized the armor and hit the ammo causing the top of the tank to be sent flying as flames erupt from the body
Enclave Soldier: Holy Shit
Enclave Soldier 2: What are you doing just standing there? MOVE YOU ASS
The troops keep pushing as other commissars with their units begin also leaving their trenches to join in on the assault
After 3 hours, Y/n and his troops are the first to reach the main gates with minimal casualties to boot. Now they face a new problem
Y/n: How are we gonna get through this damn door
The gate stood over 100 feet high, main of soild steel their was no realistic way to blow it from where they were
Soldier: We could back up and let the artillery take a crack at it
Y/n: Yeah, that sounds like a plan. EVERYONE MOVE OUT
Move back to a safe distance using the enemies' old trenches as cover
Y/n: This is Commissar Y/n request artillery support on the hive city gate. Hit it with the good shit
?: Copy Commissar
The whistling of shells coming could be heard as everyone turned their attention to the gate as artillery shells slammed into it, causing the gate to burst inwards
Y/n: Good stuff *Turns towards troops* We're Moving In!
Elsewhere
Vulkan has pulled the majority of her forces to the back of the hive city to breach the back to catch the defenders by surprise
She stands there waiting for her engineers to finish preparations on the breaching charges when a space marine runs to her
Space Marine: My lord, I bring news from the front
Vulkan: I hope good
Space Marine: Well... I'm not sure if it's good or not
Vulkan with look of wtf you mean
Space Marine: The force managed to push through the entrenched traitors and breached the main gate. Our force, there say, that heavily armored infantry, much like the ones seen on the cargo ships, led the charge. What should I have them do?
Vulkan: (thoughts) So the Enclave forces were under the command of someone within the Armageddon Steel Legion. That means, at minimum, they are loyal to the Empress. Still, that doesn't account for the missing ceramite (speaking) Order our troop at the front to support the breakthrough. We will stick to the original plan
Space Marine: Yes, Lord
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Hey guys, sorry for not posting in a while. With the beginning of school and then getting covid, which made me feel like I was dying, and Yeah, I didn't have much time for writing. But I'm back, so expect more updates on the way
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