your rose eyes upon land wide

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Abut mine skin that sows

Dent with calm, flum jolt

Sway them lies that know

flym with fire bray, bold

your rose eyes that fawn

Amid this vast land wide

mine blue orbs that spys

your rose that weep, sigh

akin espy that thin beam

alas ends with mist life

call them here, call them keen,

call them hell, call them free,

ally thus only what seen

dust dirt feed your mean

been seen hers life

lied ajar, send 'long that cage

here even eden sees evil when safe

thus mine love dote upon your love till this very page











A not so hidden feature:
This poetry contains numerous words all of 4 letters each. This was written by me to challenge my vocabulary and writing skills.

Gist from the poet
The poem wishes captures the essence of romantic yearning intertwined with existential musings, portraying a love that is both beautiful and fraught with challenges. It invites you, the reader to reflect on the nature of love and its impact on life.While celebrating the beauty of love, the poem also acknowledges its inherent struggles. It highlights the calls for connection and understanding amidst life's complexities, ultimately portraying love as a powerful yet challenging force that yearns to persist even in the face of darkness.

Glossary:
Abut - to touch or be in close proximity
Flum - to deceive or trick
Flym - to flee or escape
Bray - to make a loud, harsh cry like a donkey
Fawn - to seek favor or attention in a servile way
Amid - in the middle of
Akin - similar or related
Espy - to catch sight of
Ally - to combine or unite
Eden - a place of pristine beauty; often refers to paradise
Dote - to show excessive fondness or affection

P.S. Let me know what you think of the poem or what line stayed with you.

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