This is the list of entries submitted to my September Writing Challenge - SPECIAL MENTIONS. The writing challenge started on Facebook, here is the link:
https://www.facebook.com/kallmegaudier/posts/pfbid02gzBjM86cEzXdnqvwY9w7bDdhZGYFXZjW6LdjQjSYTb6G...
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Title: The Blue Project
Author: Liabilitee
Relevance to the prompt: Prompt #1 | The story revolves around Renée receiving a mysterious letter from her father, which changes the trajectory of her life as she uncovers a secret plot involving a dystopian future and a dangerous project.
Writing Quality: The writing is engaging but slightly disjointed at times. Some sections could benefit from smoother transitions. There's a clear dystopian tone and vivid imagery, but character dialogue can be more refined for better immersion.
Creativity: The idea of the "Blue Project" involving a futuristic world filled with cyborgs and rebels fighting against a powerful regime shows creativity. The use of a mysterious letter from the past/future aligns well with the prompt and adds intrigue. However, the plot leans toward familiar dystopian tropes, so it could be pushed further with unique elements.
Over all lesson: The story emphasizes themes of loyalty, sacrifice, and rebellion against tyranny. Renée's journey reveals that family ties and hidden truths can reshape one's understanding of justice and morality in the face of oppression.
Rating: 3/5 Stars | While there is room for improvement in the writing style, "The Blue Project" delivers a compelling narrative about family, rebellion, and future dystopia. The creative premise of a letter unraveling a web of secrets works well, and the tension between the protagonist, her father, and the antagonist is intriguing. With tighter editing, it could be even more gripping.
