This is the list of entries submitted to my September Writing Challenge - SPECIAL MENTIONS. The writing challenge started on Facebook, here is the link:
https://www.facebook.com/kallmegaudier/posts/pfbid02gzBjM86cEzXdnqvwY9w7bDdhZGYFXZjW6LdjQjSYTb6G...
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Title: The Cost of Yesterday
Author: Pencilveynnia
Relevance to the Prompt: Prompt #3 | The story focuses on Katlia's experience after buying a mysterious and disturbing memory that leads her into danger.
Writing Quality: The quality of writing is compelling but somewhat inconsistent. The story has moments of suspense, good pacing, and effective dialogue, but there are areas where transitions feel rushed or less polished. Minor grammar issues appear, but they do not significantly detract from the overall experience.
Creativity: The story's creativity shines through the concept of purchasing memories and the unsettling twist at the end. This idea offers a unique spin on a dystopian setting, where memory manipulation is commercialized, and the protagonist unwittingly purchases a violent and haunting memory.
Overall Lesson: The story warns against the unknown consequences of tampering with memories and secrets, highlighting the danger of curiosity. It suggests that some things are better left undiscovered, as they may have life-threatening consequences.
Rating: 3/5 stars | The story has an interesting premise with solid suspense and a creepy atmosphere. However, minor language and structural issues hold it back from reaching its full potential. With further development, it could become even more engaging.
