This is the list of entries submitted to my September Writing Challenge - SPECIAL MENTIONS. The writing challenge started on Facebook, here is the link:
https://www.facebook.com/kallmegaudier/posts/pfbid02gzBjM86cEzXdnqvwY9w7bDdhZGYFXZjW6LdjQjSYTb6G...
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Relevance to the Prompt: Prompt #2 | The door leads to an alternate reality that reveals Erickson's greed and desire for a perfect life.
Writing Quality: The writing is clear and engaging, though some sentences could be more polished for smoother flow. The dialogue captures the character dynamics well, and the descriptions paint vivid imagery. The ending leaves a lasting impression, though it feels a bit rushed.
Creativity: The story showcases high creativity, exploring themes of greed and the quest for an idealized life through a fantastical lens. The concept of an alternate version of oneself adds depth to the narrative.
Overall Lesson: The overall lesson explores the dangers of greed and the pursuit of perfection. Erickson's desire for a flawless life ultimately leads to his downfall, emphasizing that every choice comes with consequences.
Rating: "The Perfect Life" is an imaginative and thought-provoking short story that effectively explores the complexities of human desires and the consequences of one's choices. The narrative successfully intertwines fantasy elements with psychological themes, leaving readers with a lingering sense of reflection on the true nature of perfection.
