This is the list of entries submitted to my September Writing Challenge - SPECIAL MENTIONS. The writing challenge started on Facebook, here is the link:
https://www.facebook.com/kallmegaudier/posts/pfbid02gzBjM86cEzXdnqvwY9w7bDdhZGYFXZjW6LdjQjSYTb6G...
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Title: Crimson Violet
Author: All4faith
Writing Quality: The writing effectively builds suspense and captures a dark, eerie atmosphere. However, some parts feel rushed, especially the ending, and there are minor grammatical issues. The description of the transformation and the unsettling memory is vivid and well done.
Creativity: The story is highly creative, blending elements of horror, fantasy, and psychological thriller. The concept of using a baking ingredient tied to dark memories, and the transformation of the protagonist into a sinister figure, is original and captivating.
Overall Lesson: The lesson suggests that the pursuit of greatness, when driven by dark desires or shortcuts, can come at a terrifying cost. It highlights the danger of tampering with forbidden knowledge or secrets and how it can consume one's identity.
Rating: 3/5 Stars | The story has an intriguing premise, strong creative elements, and a well-developed sense of dread. However, the rushed pacing at the climax and minor language issues slightly detract from its full potential. With further refinement, this could become an even more powerful horror tale.
