This is the list of entries submitted to my September Writing Challenge - SPECIAL MENTIONS. The writing challenge started on Facebook, here is the link:
https://www.facebook.com/kallmegaudier/posts/pfbid02gzBjM86cEzXdnqvwY9w7bDdhZGYFXZjW6LdjQjSYTb6G...
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Relevance to the Prompt: Prompt #2 | The hidden door leads the protagonist, Karista, into a surreal and dark world where she confronts her past and the reality of her actions.
Writing Quality: The writing is intense and atmospheric, effectively immersing the reader in Karista's emotional turmoil. It fits the desired 500-1000 word count, but some sections could benefit from tighter editing for clarity. Overall, it captures the reader's attention and conveys a strong narrative.
Creativity: The concept of a hidden door leading to a graveyard where the protagonist confronts her past is intriguing and imaginative. The twist involving her daughter and the psychological horror of her past actions adds depth to the narrative.
Overall Lesson: The overall lesson emphasizes the inescapability of one's past and the truth that eventually comes to light. It illustrates how attempts to escape or bury one's sins can lead to deeper psychological consequences. The realization of being her daughter's killer serves as a poignant reminder of accountability.
Rating: 3/5 stars | THY NAME is a gripping short story that delves into themes of guilt, memory, and the confrontation with one's past. The protagonist, Karista, seeks a new beginning in a new home but is haunted by her past actions, leading to a chilling revelation.
The hidden door serves as a powerful metaphor for facing unresolved trauma. The story's pacing is effective, with a building sense of dread as Karista navigates her experiences in the graveyard, culminating in a heart-stopping twist that forces both her and the reader to confront the truth about her daughter's death.
The atmosphere is rich and immersive, drawing readers into Karista's emotional landscape. The dialogue, particularly the internal monologue, adds layers to the narrative, showcasing her internal struggle and the complexity of her feelings regarding guilt and responsibility.
Overall, this story demonstrates strong creativity and effective writing, making it a compelling read. It leaves readers with a lingering sense of unease and reflection on the nature of guilt and the permanence of one's choices.
