Broken

Chapter One

A/N So this is my first serious story comment on if you like this or not thanks be honest enjoy the story! (hopefully) (This is the unedited version )

I remember sitting on a hospital chair, the room was cold, empty , I hated it. remember the doctor walking out and looking at me with that pitiful look. I remember the words that ruined my life, "I'm sorry" . I remember crying more than I ever had up until then. I remember having to pack all my stuff, i remember sneaking some of my mothers things into my bag. I remember going to the crappy orphanage "Sunshine Paradise". Up 'till today i still remember the day i lost my life.

My name is Sally Hills, my mother died when I was 14, I've lived with her my entire life, my dad died when i was a baby and i have no other family, no godparents no nothing. I've always stood out in a crowd but i never liked it at all , I have red straight hair down to my shoulders and sea green eyes, I'm always thinking about my mother, though I smile, on the inside I'm never truly happy. My story begins at an orphanage , "Sunshine paradise" to be exact. Who would have guessed my life could have changed as much as it did again, for better and for worse.

I was excited to see where I would be spending a long time at, by the name one would think it's a really cool place like a camp or something, on the contrary, Sunny Paradise was a long old looking house next to the woods, the windows were dusty, but you could see through them, the walls had moss but they were technically safe. The roof was flat, with a slight slant so the rail falls , i could see myself up there already. As I walked into the orphanage I realized I was screwed, there was cloths all over the floor beds on both sides of the long hall in a row with a bedside table next to each of them , the place smelled something between sweat and perfume, there was a make up set on the floor so at least there was another girl . The man who brought me hear, Josh , help my bags, I hated him a little for bringing me to this place. "hold on" he said as he put my bags down and walked to a door to the end of the hall. I wondered which bed was going to be mine, i wondered who i would be sleeping next to, how was my new life going to be?

After what felt like three minutes Josh walked out with a woman who i guessed was my foster mother.
Her hair was short and brown, she wore a short black dress and a big smile i can see was obviously very fake. Josh introduced us, "Sally this is Jane, your foster mother, Jane this is Sally the new foster kid, i"ll be back next week" those were Josh's last words before he left. The woman who now had a name looked at me how a cat would look at its prey before pouncing. I gulped. I'm screwed I thought to myself, just as fast as the thought came I tried to shake it off, it'll be fine......right? Jane spoke after a while, " you live hear now, for as long as you live hear you will pull your own weight and cook your own meals, you get until six o'clock on the dot to be back inside and bed is at ten o'clock any later and you get to clean the toilet, enjoy your stay that one is your bed" she said pointing to a bed under a window "thank you miss" I said as I walked to my bad and sat down. Looking at the door I just realized that I had until six to do mostly whatever I want. I up to get my bags from the doorway, just as i bent down to pick it up the door flew open and hit me in the head knocking me down on my but. I shut my eyes in pain rubbing my head. "are you okay?" asked a female voice over me, "y-yeah I'm fine, just a random hit to the head out of nowhere" we both laughed a bit. "I'm really sorry" Said the girl reaching a hand out for me, i took it and she pulled me up with ease, the words came out of my mouth before reaching my brain , "your strong" . She laughed, "yeah, you sorta need to be around hear" she smiled and dusted off my shoulder. "my names Brianna by the way, yours?"

I smiled, "I'm Sally, thanks for hitting me and helping me up" we laughed again. "anytime" she said with a genuine smile. I laughed, " so is there anything fun to do around hear or do we look at dirty cloths all day?" She laughed again. Brianna was pretty, she had blue hair that was tied into a pony tail and deep brown eyes, she was also fit, i could tell she liked a sport of some kind. "let me show you something" she said looking excited "okay let me just put my bags by my bed." I ran to my bed putting my bags on my bed then back to her. "okay ready" she smiled that bright genuine Brianna smile I've come to love already. "let's go, i have something to show you" she held my hand as she dragged me outside.