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‧₊˚ ☁️⋅𝐑𝐄𝐒𝐔𝐋𝐓𝐒 : 𝐎𝐏𝐄𝐍𝐈𝐍𝐆 𝐒𝐏𝐄𝐋𝐋𓂃 ࣪ ִֶָ☾。

𝖠 𝗁𝖾𝖺𝗋𝗍𝖿𝖾𝗅𝗍 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗄 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝗍𝗈 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖾𝗇𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗃𝗎𝖽𝗀𝖾, Gise_lliana, 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 𝗆𝖺𝗀𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗅 𝖽𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗐𝗂𝗌𝖽𝗈𝗆. 𝖢𝗈𝗇𝗀𝗋𝖺𝗍𝗎𝗅𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇𝗌 𝗍𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝖾𝗅𝗅𝖻𝗂𝗇𝖽𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗐𝗂𝗇𝗇𝖾𝗋𝗌—𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖻𝗋𝗂𝗅𝗅𝗂𝖺𝗇𝖼𝖾 𝗍𝗋𝗎𝗅𝗒 𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗇𝖾𝗌!

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𐔌 . ⋮ 1𝗦𝗧 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥𝗦 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

sondermelle » Listen To Me

Scene setting (17/20)

Foreshadowing (18.5/20)

Tone Establishment (20/20)

Character introduction (20/20)

Connection to the main plot (20/20)

➦ Total: (95.5/100)

Recommendation for improvements:
The prologue was extremely well written. Grammar, vocabulary and phrase construction was fantabulous! Consider adding a bit more details for the purpose of enhancing the world building. Overall it was great! Great Work! Keep it up!

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𐔌 . ⋮ 2𝗡𝗗 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

wordywonders » Against the Dark

Scene setting (20/20)

Foreshadowing (18/20)

Tone Establishment (20/20)

Character introduction (18/20)

Connection to the main plot (19/20)

➦ Total: (95/100)

Recommendation for improvements:
The prologue was very well written indeed. Except for few occasional grammatical errors that could be eliminated via proofreading, everything else was just perfect. Good Work!