‧₊˚ ☁️⋅𝐑𝐄𝐒𝐔𝐋𝐓𝐒 : 𝐅𝐈𝐑𝐄'𝐒 𝐂𝐇𝐀𝐌𝐏𝐈𝐎𝐍𓂃 ࣪ ִֶָ☾。

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𝖠 𝗁𝖾𝖺𝗋𝗍𝖿𝖾𝗅𝗍 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗄 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝗍𝗈 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖾𝗇𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗃𝗎𝖽𝗀𝖾, Gise_lliana & Kanye_Ariel, 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 𝗆𝖺𝗀𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗅 𝖽𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗐𝗂𝗌𝖽𝗈𝗆

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𝖠 𝗁𝖾𝖺𝗋𝗍𝖿𝖾𝗅𝗍 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗄 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝗍𝗈 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖾𝗇𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗃𝗎𝖽𝗀𝖾, Gise_lliana & Kanye_Ariel, 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 𝗆𝖺𝗀𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗅 𝖽𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗐𝗂𝗌𝖽𝗈𝗆. 𝖢𝗈𝗇𝗀𝗋𝖺𝗍𝗎𝗅𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇𝗌 𝗍𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝖾𝗅𝗅𝖻𝗂𝗇𝖽𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗐𝗂𝗇𝗇𝖾𝗋𝗌—𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖻𝗋𝗂𝗅𝗅𝗂𝖺𝗇𝖼𝖾 𝗍𝗋𝗎𝗅𝗒 𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗇𝖾𝗌!

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𐔌 . ⋮ 1𝗦𝗧 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

EyesDucking » Imperfectly Perfect

Scene Setting: 20/20

Foreshadowing: 20/20

Tone Establishment: 20/20

Character Introduction: 20/20

Connection to the plot: 20/20

➦ Total: 100/100

Recommendations for improvement: The storyline is absolutely fantastic! I have no comments on as what to improve since the flow of the story along with the suspense and tension build up is perfect. The blend of the traits of the protagonist and their surroundings as well as the outcome of those reflected in their personality seems very apt and perfectly done.  

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𐔌 . ⋮ 2𝗡𝗗 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

FHLevin » Shadow and Steel

Scene Setting: 18/20

Foreshadowing: 17/20

Tone Establishment: 20/20

Character Introduction : 16/20

Connection to the plot: 20/20

➦ Total: 91/100

Recommendations for improvement: It was indeed a very interesting experience while reading this book. Here are few recommendations for improvement.

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