﹒⌗﹒A magical parchment from 𝗤𝘂𝗲𝗲𝗻 𝗔𝗲𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 beckons you to 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗰𝗲𝗹𝗲𝘀𝘁𝗶𝗮𝗹 𝗼𝗮𝘀𝗶𝘀. Bring forth the inactive 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆𝘁𝗲𝗹𝗹𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝗯𝗶𝗹𝗶𝘁𝗶𝗲𝘀 that have been buried inside you and come with us to save the universe. Out...
Recommendations for improvement: The storyline is absolutely fantastic! I have no comments on as what to improve since the flow of the story along with the suspense and tension build up is perfect. The blend of the traits of the protagonist and their surroundings as well as the outcome of those reflected in their personality seems very apt and perfectly done.