𝖠 𝗁𝖾𝖺𝗋𝗍𝖿𝖾𝗅𝗍 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗄 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝗍𝗈 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖾𝗇𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗃𝗎𝖽𝗀𝖾, Funasticks & sugararmy07, 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 𝗆𝖺𝗀𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗅 𝖽𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗐𝗂𝗌𝖽𝗈𝗆. 𝖢𝗈𝗇𝗀𝗋𝖺𝗍𝗎𝗅𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇𝗌 𝗍𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝖾𝗅𝗅𝖻𝗂𝗇𝖽𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗐𝗂𝗇𝗇𝖾𝗋𝗌—𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖻𝗋𝗂𝗅𝗅𝗂𝖺𝗇𝖼𝖾 𝗍𝗋𝗎𝗅𝗒 𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗇𝖾𝗌!
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𐔌 . ⋮ 1𝗦𝗧 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱
sondermelle » In Memoriam
(Mallory × Reid)Chemistry : 20/20
Development : 20/20
Emotional Depth : 20/20
Overall Theme : 19/20
Dynamic Balance : 19.5/20
➦ Total : 98.5/100
Recommendation for Improvement:
The chemistry was so good. The ups and downs were beautifully expressed. The bond was beautiful and had almost perfect balance. Nothing specific to improve here.━━━━
𐔌 . ⋮ 2𝗡𝗗 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱
SeraDrake » Ancilla
(Magister × Ancilla)Chemistry : 20/20
Development : 19/20
Emotional Depth : 20/20
Overall Theme : 19/20
Dynamic Balance : 18/20
➦ Total : 96/100
Recommendation for Improvement:
The characters are complex, but that's what makes them interesting. I loved the personalities of both of the main protagonists. Their chemistry and the way their emotions are portrayed is definitely some praise worthy work. The characters were well introduced, well established, and well developed. They were relatable and artistically beautiful. I basically loved them but would give a few reasons about the marks I deducted:
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