﹒⌗﹒A magical parchment from 𝗤𝘂𝗲𝗲𝗻 𝗔𝗲𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 beckons you to 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗰𝗲𝗹𝗲𝘀𝘁𝗶𝗮𝗹 𝗼𝗮𝘀𝗶𝘀. Bring forth the inactive 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆𝘁𝗲𝗹𝗹𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝗯𝗶𝗹𝗶𝘁𝗶𝗲𝘀 that have been buried inside you and come with us to save the universe. Out...
Recommendation for Improvement: The chemistry was so good. The ups and downs were beautifully expressed. The bond was beautiful and had almost perfect balance. Nothing specific to improve here.
Recommendation for Improvement: The characters are complex, but that's what makes them interesting. I loved the personalities of both of the main protagonists. Their chemistry and the way their emotions are portrayed is definitely some praise worthy work. The characters were well introduced, well established, and well developed. They were relatable and artistically beautiful. I basically loved them but would give a few reasons about the marks I deducted: