𝟐𝟔. 𝐇𝐚𝐥𝐝𝐢 𝐡𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐬, 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐥𝐚𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭𝐞𝐫

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Hello fictorians

Sorry for the late update

Special hello to silent readers
🫶🏻 🥰🔪🥰🔪🫶🏻

So the comments on the last chapter came out so interesting and you all liked the sister-brother duo so much (Janki-Manav) so there are going to be more of their scenes 😭🫶🏻

Also congratulations on 100k reads on UTR, The book was started when it barely get 50 reads and now 100k it means a lot to me 🎀🫶🏻

One more thing: I came across some comments on the previous chapter; some were very good. I replied to each and every one, but there were some comments by "someone" that said I am dragging the story to an end too quickly and that every character is in love with someone, wanting to confess, then coming into a relationship, making the story boring. Regarding some dialogues like, "Kaisi lag rahi hoon?" he replies, "Bilkul meri," and they commented, "eww cliché plot." Sorry, miss, but what do you mean by that? If the story is boring, then drop it now; who the hell is forcing you to read? Tell me what happens in a multi-couple desi rom-com book-don't leads fall in love or don't they come into a relationship? Then I guess you just joined this community or you are a beginner. Genuine readers, tell me, is my story becoming boring or am I dragging it to the end?

Target:-
Votes: 500
Comments: 250

Now enjoy reading>

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The grand garden of Singhania mansion buzz with excitement and activity as the Haldi ceremony preparations were in full swing.

The air was filled with the gentle chatter of family and guests. The vibrant, colorful flowers, like marigold and roses adorned the garden pathways.

The aroma of Haldi wafted through the air, filling the surroundings with its warm, earthy, and slightly spicy scent. The fragrance was reminiscent of turmeric's natural, herbal essence.

Ashok and Amrita, the busy one with preparations engrossed in their assigned tasks.

Shivansh, stood near the corner, waiting eagerly for girl's side to come, dressed in a beautiful, pale yellow kurta made of rich, silky fabric, adorned with intricate embroidery and delicate patterns, paired with matching pyjamas and a golden dupatta draped elegantly over his shoulder.

Sakshi noticed the unease in his movements, came near him and teased, "Kya karen tadap hi aisi hai..", saying dramatically earning a smack on her head from him.

He remarked, "Chup kar aur phone kar apni bhabi ko kahan rhe gye..", said irritated.

She said, "Uff bhai itne impatient, ruko zara aa rahe honge dulhe ho zara feel mein aao", her voice teasing.

"Dulha hoon isliye toh impatient hoon", he winced and cried innerly.

Sakshi's eyes lit up seeing the entrance, Shivansh followed her gaze and rolled his eyes.

The person coming near them, Naksh.

Naksh forwarded a hand towards Shivansh, Shivansh smirked and squeezed his hand forcefully, Naksh raised his eyebrows, as they pulled back, Naksh teased, "Don't tell me you are still mad at us", he pointed towards him and Sakshi.

Shivansh again rolled his eyes, "Of course I am".

Naksh shook his head while Sakshi just enjoyed the banter.

The air shifted with excitement as the bride reached the venue, Shivansh's face lit up with excitement, Naksh noticing the shift in his reaction, teased, "Oh desperate dulhe raja ko toh dekho", Shivansh glared at him and ignored.

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