Ruby Rose had been training on a uninhabited island north of the island of patch. Unknown to her; the site was now testing grounds for Atlas new destructive weapon.
She saw a hypersonic missile come in to her north.....then the sky glowed blinding o...
The third edition of TGOAAE is out on my published works list! The new name is The God of Agony and Evolution: Rebirth.
There will be a few important changes made in the new version that should greatly reinforce the plot and help build up Ruby's character to be better than the last two renditions I've made.
Atlas will not help her right after the Veridian Isles blast, which that is the name I gave the islands in the new book. Ruby will not be a pacifist, either.
That was a big problem in this book with Ruby's character; her being far too passive. She should be angry at everything for what has happened to her, but she should also realize how important self-control is and struggle to contain the instincts overwhelming her.
I recommend giving the new book a read and do let me know if you have any criticisms, the story won't get better if I don't learn from my mistakes.
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