Surprise Visit

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I woke up, and it was 9:30 am. I stretched, and walked in my bathroom, and started my bubble bath. I walked back in my room, and chose to wear my black tank top that said Deadly in red letters with my bleached, ripped skinny jeans, and my all red Levis. I walked back in my bathroom, and took my bath, and wrapped a towel around me. I walked out, and got my red matching bra, and underwear set out my drawer with my black, low top socks. I lotioned my body, and put on deoderant. I put on my clothes, and put my hair in a messy bun. I put on my red bow, with my red pearl earrings, and my red wristband. I brushed my teeth, and put on some perfume, and grabbed my purse, keys, and phone. I walked out my room to see Deanna eating breakfast with Sherrie.
Me: Good morning!
Sherrie: Goodmorning!
Deanna: Deonta ok?
Me: I can pick him up today.
Deanna: Let me ride!
Me: Yeah, Sherrie you wanna go?
Sherrie: Yeah, I guess.
Me: Hurry up, and get ready I'm sure he ready to go!
Deanna POV:
I walked in my room, and took a 10 minute bath, and put on my pink matching bra, and underwear set with my pink half shirt that wait Slayed in white. I put on my white, ripped skinny jeans with my pink flats, and my diamond covered belly ring with my hair in a high bun, and walked out.
Sherrie POV:
I walked in my room, and started to pick out clothes since I already had a bath like 20 minutes ago. I decided to wear my grey tights, with my white v-neck, and my white Toms. I straightened my hair, and grabbed my stuff, and walked out.
Brittany POV:
They both finally came out. I grabbed a piece of bacon, and my sweet tea from last night and walked out. We went to my car, and pulled off. We finally arrived at the hospital, and got to his room to see him sleep. I kissed his lips, and his eyes shot open.
Me: You ready to go?
Deonta: Yeah!
I called the doctor, and I signed the release papers, and he got dressed, and we left. We finally pulled up to his house, and the girls were so amazed.
Sherrie: Deonta, Mannn you gotta let me stay with you!
Deonta: Ion know about that!
Deanna: Nice house.
Deonta: Thanks.
Me: So, when your mama coming?
Deonta: This evening, so y'all gorbplenty of time to clean dis house up.
Me: What you mean y'all, nigga you the one when made the mess, boy you bet ta get of yo as*, fu*k you think we is!
Deonta: Sorry, dang I'll clean up no need to for the loud language in this expensive house.
Me: NIGGA!
Deonta: OK, Ok!
We got to work, and we all had our jobs. Sherrie had to clean all the bathrooms. Deanna had to clean the bedrooms, Deonta had to do the living room, game room, and dining room, and I had the kitchen, and dishes. I finally finished the kitchen, and decided to take a rest. I sat on the sofa, and cut on the t.v. I was watching Love and Hip Hop, and Deanna and Sherrie walked in.
Me: Y'all finish?
Them: Yeah!
Deanna: Deonta still not finish?
Me: He got one more room to clean, and he done.
Deanna: Well, y'all wanna go shopping?
Me: Naw, we gotta wait till his mama come.
Deanna: Well, I guess we will have to watch a movie then.
Me: Yupp.
Sherrie: Oh oh!, let's watch 50 shades of grey!
Me: Dang girl you getting all exited and sh*t, dam*! I'll look it up on his Netflix. I cut on his flat screen, and went to Netflix, and found the movie.
Me: Found it!
Sherrie: Yes!
Deanna: The popcorn ready!
Me: Being it, I'm bout to press play!
She brought the popcorn, and 3 cans of sprite, and I pressed play, and we all sat on the couch. We were at the part when they were making love, and Deonta walked in.
Deonta: What the he*l y'all watching, y'all watching them freaky as* movies.
Me: Why you talking your freaky as* got me pregnant.
Deonta: That's another story, and why y'all sitting in y'all as*es, and got me cleaning up.
Deanna: Its yo house nigga, fu*k you mean.
Sherrie: Umhm.
Ding!Dong!
Deonta: Cut that sh*t off y'all go give my mama a heart attack.
Me: Dang it was getting good.
Sherrie: Please just let me finish.
Me: Girl, we'll watch it on our Netflix.
I cut the t.v off, and Deonta let his mama, and sister in.
Sheren: Hello everyone.
Sherrie: Hi, nice to meet you my name is Sherrie I'm a friend of Deonta, and Brittany.
Sheren: Nice to meet you to sweetheart your very pretty.
Deanna: Hi, I'm Deanna I'm a friend of your son, and Brittany, nice to meet you ma'am.
Sheren: Nice to meet you as well, and this is my daughter Dianna.
Dianna: Hi everyone.
Deanna: Hi.
Sherrie: Hi.
Deonta: Hey sis.
Sheren: Hello to you to Deonta!
Deonta: umhm.
Sheren: Now do you guys mind helping me get these groceries out of my car.
Everyone: Yes ma'am.
We all walked to her all black KIA, and got all the groceries, and carried them to the kitchen, and I sat down.
Sheren: Come on y'all girls get in this kitchen, and help me cook, especially Sherrie, and Brittany you guys are about to be parents, now let's get to work.
Me: Yes ma'am.
Sherrie: Coming.
Sheren: Brittany I want you to start on the fried chicken. Sherrie I want you to start on the collar greens with turkey, and Deanna I want you to start on the macaroni and cheese, and Deonta you are making the sweet tea, and Dianna is making the potato salad and I am making the cornbread, and pies, now get to work.
I was seasoning the chicken, and there was a knock at the door. I turned around, and saw a familiar face.
Deonta: Omg!
Sheren: Baby is that you?
???: Baby I'm home!
Deanna: Who is that?
Me: I don't know but he looks so familiar.
I walked to the living room, and Deonta looked at me with sorrow in his eyes.
???: Hi, I'm Deonta Father.
Me: Y-Your who?
???: Deonta father.
Me: You act like you don't remember me, I said with tears running down my face.
???: Um, who are you?
Me: YOU KILLED MY DAD!
???: You must be mistaken.
Me: I was a little girl you came in my house, and killed my dad! You took him away from me, and all you said was don't fall for a thug, You messed up my whole life, You!
D-Dad: I-Im so sorry, I had to.
Me: No you didn't, no you didn't y-you made my mother stop loving me, you made my mother blame me for it, you made my mother start drugs, YOU!
D-Dad: IF I WOULD NOT HAVE DONE IT I WPULD BE DEAD, AND I WOULDNT BE ABLE TO SEE MY FAMILY, MY WIFE, MY KIDS, THEY WOULD BE JUST LIKE YOU IF I WOULDNT HAVE DONT IT, THINK IF YOU WERE IN MY SITUATION, WHAT WOULD YOU DO, HUH!
Me: I would have thought to myself how that girl would feel that her dad died in front of her, I would have thought I would rather die with honor than to die knowing I took a little girls dad in front of her, and now her only dad, her everything is gone, and that she will NEVER be the same again, so yeah I would have just left, and got killed knowing that little girl is happy.
D-Dad: I-Im sorry!
Me: Thank you guys for inviting me, but I think I'll be leaving now, Deanna, and Sherrie let's go I'll order pizza.
Deanna: Bye.
Sherrie: Bye.
I walked out the house, and felt better that I got to tell that nightmare how I felt I pulled off, and the car ride home was silent. We pulled up to the house, and I grabbed my phone, keys, and purse and locked my car, and we walked in the elevator. We finally arrived at the apartment, I unlocked it, and walked straight in my room. I kicked off my shoes, and changed into a white tank top, and some grey jogging pants with my white low top socks, and my black and white New Balance. I put my hair in a messy ponytail. I walked out the room, and Deanna was in the kitchen cooking, and Sherrie was watching 50 shades of grey on Netflix. I walked in the kitchen, and grabbed a water bottle out the freezer, and grabbed my keys, phone, and put a 20 dollar bill in my pocket.
Me: I'm going to the gym.
Deanna: Ok.
Sherrie: Umhm.
I walked out the door, and went in the elevator, and got in my car. I pulled off, and my phone started ringing, and it was an unknown number. I answered it.
Me: Hello?
???: Hey, remember me?
Me: Um, sorry but who are you?
???: I'm the doctor you met in the elevator.
Me: Oh, hey.......
???: My name is Michael.
Me: Hey Michael, my name is Brittany.
Doctor: I'm on my lunch break for 1 hour, and I was hoping I could spend it with you.
Me: I-I have a boyfriend.
Doctor: Oh, sorry.
Me: But, you could meet me at the gym across from hi bet sports, and we can exercise together, because I'm pulling up now.
Michael: I guess that'll be nice I'll be there in a minute.
Me: Ok, bye.
*End of Conversation*
I hung up the phone, and cut it off. I got out the car, and locked in and went in the public jym. I was lifting some weights, and Michael walked in.
Michael: Hi Brittany!
Me: Hey Michael, you ready to exercise?
Michael: Yeah, do you mind me taking off my shirt?
Me: Um, No its fine.
He took off his shirt, and he had a 8-pack with muscles, and I didn't realize I was staring until he said something.
Michael: Brriiitttaany!
Me: Oh, sorry.
Michael: Your ok, now let's lift some weights!
Me: Alright.
I was lofting weights, and saw Deonta car pull up next door at the club.
Me: Michael, I had a nice time, but I have some business to take care of, bye I'll call you.
Michael: Alright, bye beautiful!
I walked out the exercising room, and decided to change before I go in a club. I drove to the mall, and bought me a tight fitted black dress, and some all black pumps with red bottoms, and my a red pearl necklace. I went in the dressing room, and put it on after paying for it. I put my hair in a messy bun. I walked out with my phone, and keys in my hand, and got in my car. I put my phone on the charger, and locked my car, and walked straighy in the club, because they know me, because I came here with Deonta. I looked around the club, and saw Crystal walking into this dark room. I decided to ask her where Deonta was so I followed her, and it led to V.I.P. I walked in, and there was lots of smoke, I couldn't barely see nobody. I walked through, and saw Crystal giving somebody a lap dance, but I couldn't see the person, because of the smoke. I walked over to Crystal, and tapped her shoulder.
Crystal: Wtf you want!
???: Crystal Wtf you doing?
That voice sounded so familiar.
Crystal: This bit*h tapping my shoulder.
Me: Who tf you calling a bit*h!!
Crystal: You!
I started swinging, and she was on the floor, and that guy picked me up off of her. I turned around, and it was Deonta.
Me: D-Deonta!
Deonta: Omg, baby I'm so sorry it was just to keep my mind off things.
Me: I'm pregnant with your child, and you out here getting lap dances from these who*es, after you know what happened today!
Deonta: Brittany I'm so-
Me: Fu*k you I never want to see you again, and Crystal you can have him!
Deonta: Baby I'm sorry, please don't leave me!!!
I gave him the finger, and walked out with tears running down my face I guess we over.

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