An odd beginning.

Chapter 6:Hell

"I'll go!"I said jumping of the ledge I landed with little pain kinda like falling in mud except for the 50 foot fall"You all right?"lee yelled down"Yeah I'm fine you coming down-aaaaaagh"My words were cut of by metal's battle cry"Lee come on!"metal yelled"No I'm staying up here and giving you cover and directions!"lee yelled"Ok fine but you better do a good job"We walked about five minutes but it felt like five days in hells heat but after all that we finally found a hell forge"Finally it's been so long!"I yell out"Actually it's been five minutes!"Lee yelled at us"Well it felt like five days"
(2 HOURS LATER)
"Alright let's get the last of the Crimintine."I told metal"You know once you get past the heat hell is pretty nice,I haven't seen a monster since we got here."metal quoted,but as soon as he said that the ground started to shake"What the hell is that!"metal yelled"GUYS GET THE HELL OUT OF-hell." I interrupted him but my laughter was cut short because I suddenly felt a jolting pain in my side"AARG!!!!"I yelled as I fell to the ground"BYRON!!!!"metal yelled as he dropped the bag with the Crimintine"Forget about me get the Crimintine."managed to choke out through the blood coming out my mouth"NO I LOST ALL MY SHEEP,I LOST MY HOME,I LOST MY MEANING IN LIFE,BUT I'M NOT GONNA LOSE MY FRIEND!!!!!!"metal said pulling out his weapons and attacking something I couldn't see cause I was starting to black out the rest was a blur Lee jumping down and shooting something with his phenox blaster then he grabbed me pulled out a grappling hook and launched us up the the cave above"I'll be right back I got to help metal!"But by the time he finished his sentence I got one look and I saw metal fighting the wall of flesh(the wall of flesh is well his name he is a giant wall of flesh and is the king of hell.)In the darkness of my mind I saw a light I went to it it was a door I opened it and then I was in that I thought is heaven,I was with ginger and all my friends,I was in a place before the explosions happens,I was in a place that made me happy.And then I woke up I was in a small cottage with some medical equipment I was in the hospital when I woke up a nurse came in and picked up some stuff from a cabinet"Drink this."I look at the bottle and see it's a potion definitely one of the weaker ones,but I drank it anyway cause I knew it would help"What happened?"I asked the nurse"The wall of flesh shot you with a laser,your lucky it didn't go near the heart,but it did go near you lung and you got some 2nd degree burns in your left lung."The nurse explained"How long till I heal?"I ask"Five months."the nurse said"Five months!"I yelled"But if you get stronger potion I might be like two days.As soon as she finished the door opened and Lee and metal walked in wearing Crimintine armor"How you doing?"metal asked"I have a hole in my side,second degrees burns in my lung,and I won't be able to fight for five months except if I get a stronger potion,so how you think I'm doing?"I ask"so good."metal said jokingly"Nice armor,looks like the Crimintine was almost wotrth dying for."I said"so anyway guess what I beet the crud out the wall of flesh."metal said as Lee left"hey metal you know all that stuff you said when I got shot if it makes you feel better you got me,and also go get that fucking potion so can fight.yeah?"metal smiled and as he walked out I saw tears in his eyes.