True Grit on The Ice

Chapter 4 (caution very naughty scene)

I apologize again for the grammer mistakes, this is also my first time writting a scene like this so please tell what you thought and how i can improve it

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He pulled her into his arms and he kissed her it was one of those long hot kisses that left your senses reeling. Their breathing became heavy because that kiss was soul searing and one that went all the way to her core. She felt his arms come around her and bring her into his body and then closer still to him. She could now feel how strong he is, and then she moved her hand from his shoulders to his abs and grasped his shirt in a tight grip because she wanted to feel his strength. His hands started moving up and down her back in a sensual motion that relaxed her and yet it felt so good, she wanted more. He slowly backed her up against the door and started to take off her clothes, this knuckles scrapping across her skin. As he was doing this he kissed the newly reveled skin until she was tingly all over and wanting more. She was in her bra and underwear when she pulled away from him and said “what about you, it’s not fair that I’m nearly naked and you not.”

“We can fix that,” was all he said starting to pull his shirt over his head. “No I want to do it,” I told him. He stopped taking his shirt of and looked at me for a second then said, “okay, I’m all yours.”

She slowly reached her shaking hand to his shirt buttons and started to unbutton them, sliding each of them from it’s designated hole. She slowly slid his shirt from his shoulders, drag her nails up and down his arms, she felt his body shudder. Then she pulled his undershirt from his pant and with his help she took it off him kissing his. She was now at his pants. This made her more than a little nervous; she’d never done this before. Evy slowly reached for the button on his pants and with shaking hands she undid it, then reach for the zipper he groaned as his pants loosened and she pulled it down all the while letting my knuckle rub against him. She pulled his pants down with his help and throws them over her shoulder somewhere. She then gave him a shy smile looking up at him he reciprocated the smile with a knowing look and then pulled her too him. The shock of feeling his flesh against hers made her gasp it felt so good. He put two fingers under my chin and lifted my head so he could kiss her again. The kiss deepen until it was all she could think of until the world around her went away. His hands felt like they were all over her body, just lightly skimming while in other places he was firm with his touch. At those times she noticed just how big and strong his hand are, this really turned her on and made her want him to touch her everywhere. She loved the feel of his hands on me. He picked her up and moved to the bed that dominated the room. Then he laid her down gently and followed afterwards making sure not to hurt her by placing toomuch of his weight onto her. All the while he never stopped kissing her. He began to trace a path from her neck to her hip over and over again. Taking care when he went by her breast to fondle and maker her hotter then she already was. What he did to her made her stomach go crazy. He then made his way back up to her chest where he began to mold and play with her breast. His mouth traced a hot trail down her neck to her chest. He suckled one breast while play with the other then he moved to give the other breast the same type of loving.

Her breath quickened, she slide her hand into his hair to keep him where he was. His hair was silky, she started to pull on it with gentle tugs. His fingers started plucking my nipples until they became hard, when the slightest touch made me moan. He moved his lips up to hers, she protest the loss of heat from her chest but forgave him when he just kissed her heatedly. He moved back down her neck kissing it and nibbling until he made it back to her chest. He put him mouth back onto her nipple she gasped in delight, arching into him. It felt even better the second time, he scraped his teeth over her nipple and it made her shudder and moan. He pulled away and to blow on her wet nipple; it heightened my senses and made me groan. His mouth went to my other nipple where he did the same thing while she writhered in sensual delight. As he started moving downward she became a little uncomfortable, and stopped him and told him she wasn’t read for that. He tried to tell her not to be afraid but this just wasn’t what felt right at this moment.

“It’s okay,” he told me “there’s other stuff I can do for you that would give you pleasure.”  She pulled his lips to hers and kissed him with everything she had letting him know how much she wanted him. He trailed his fingers down my body and between my thighs he gently pressed them forward into her body. Her hips started to undulate to the rhythm of his thrusting fingers then suddenly and to her annoyance he pulled his hand away. He draped his body over mine careful not to hurt her; the feel of him over her was intoxicating. She felt him pull away for a sec and heard something tear, thank God he remembered a condom cause she certainly didn’t. Instead of ruining the mood she found it quite intoxicating and Evy was oddly grateful. It made even more excited because she knew what was going to happen soon; this was really going to happen she thought. Then she felt him start to thrust inside of her and her world went still for a moment. It was an odd feeling, and it also hurt a bit because she had never done this before, “ wait a sec please, I’m not used to this.” He stops, after a few moments she adjusted to the feel of him and started to mover her hips. Once he feels her doing this he begins to thrust forward again and this time it didn’t hurt, but it made her feel weird in a good way though. He kept touching and kissing me and it only heightened her arousal making me feel more.

“Oh god, please don’t stop,” she tell him on a moan.

“Whose stopping,” was his reply to me as he thrusted faster. Her body started to feel weightless and it was so sensitive to his every touch. She could tell she was close to something she just didn’t know what. He thursted forward hard into her and she was pushed over that final peak was moaning under his final thrusts as he also peaked.

A little while later while she was sleeping he pulled her into his chest she grumbled a little in her sleep because she he moved her, it was actually kind of cute at the same time. She really was tiny in everyway and different from most girls, he just had a feeling about that. She was blunt but shy at the same time, what did she say before while we were, well he though while smiled. Wait! She said she wasn’t used to this does this mean… Shit, it probably does. Okay so how should he handle this? Well normally Brandon would leave in the early morning and just mutter a g’bye to who ever he was with. But in this case he couldn’t he also wouldn’t do that to her, she doesn’t deserve that. What about morning what was he going to do then. Breakfast he thought yeah that’s a good idea and he was pretty sure that MDZ went home with her friends so maybe they could all met for breakfast, yeah that’s a good idea. That was his last thought before he to fell asleep

Evy stretched and felt so relaxed until she felt something warm under my head and stilled then she looked up and shit, shit, shit. She never let me emphasize that never ever does stuff like she did last night with anyone. What was she going to do, just then she felt his arm tighten around her and pull her closer to him and he also started rubbing her back. Evy pretty much purred at that, she love when she got her back rubbed. Wait back to the problem at hand, what am she going to do?

“I hope you know I can pretty much see you thinking right now,” he laughed out. At her expression he said, “I promise I won’t judge you for last night but if it helps I did have a really good night and would like to take you out to breakfast.”

“Uhh you would?”

“Yes I would, why don’t you take a shower, I’m sure your muscles are sore. I promise I won’t leave,” he said genuinely.

“Okay thank you, I won’t take long promise,” but as she started to get off the bed when she noticed how sore she was. “On second thought I may take a long shower, hope you don’t mind.”

“Hey don’t worry about me, take as long as you need I’ll go watch some TV,” he reassured her.

“Okay thanks.”

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Alright guys help me out here, I'm not sure how to write this next scene... should it be dramatic, calm like whatever, or should it be a playful with some drama... Please help me!!