Dark Secrets (Jason Mccann)

I finally made it here. The place, where my parents sent me off just because they think it's time for me to live on my own. Really, but what's the point of living alone but you have your parents to pay the bills for you? There, I said it. 

My parents got me this big and scary but cool looking house. It was grey, with black and white painting on some parts. And the house is surrounded by tall trees, which I liked, because it's nature. And of course, this is definitely too big for one person like me. But I liked it. 

My admiring for the house was blocked when suddenly my cellphone rings. I reached it and clicked on the green button, "Hello?" 

"Hello darling! How was the new home? Did you like it?" I knew it was my mom the minute heard her breathing.

"It was good, I liked it. Definitely too big for a one person like me, but eh, didn't really matter." I said, as I grunt with the struggle to pick up the heaviest box while managing to talk on the phone.

"Well okay, darling. Just call me if you ever need anything okay? Me and daddy misses you already!" She said. 

"Really mom, it's been like what? 2 hours since I walked out of your house?" I chuckled, thinking of how ridiculous your parents can be. 

"Darling, I have to go, your daddy is calling me! Love you darling, take care, I love you!" And with that she hung up. 

"Love you too mom.." I sighed as I put down my phone at the passenger seat and continue to picking up boxes and bringing them into the house. 

"Whoa.." I formed my lips to an "o", amazed of what the house looks like, once I stepped in. It's really scary and cool from the outside, but when you get in, it's like a whole new level of cool and mystery and kind of, vampire-like. 

It has this big chandelier, with little fake candles around them. And it has this stairs that swirls all the way up. I wonder how long it takes to get up there.. And a piano.. a piano? whoa this is so cool!

I ran to the piano and touched the side of it. "It's dusty.." I whispered. "So today's a cleaning day." I smiled. I went out to grab the rest of the box inside. 

"My phone!" I ran outside back again, looking for my phone inside my car. 

I checked everywhere, it's not here. I ran back inside and look for it. It's been 10-15 minutes, I couldn't find it. 

Suddenly I hear my ringtone ringing. "Was that, mine? Where is it?" I said walking, trying to trace the sound, from where it comes from. "Outside?" I whispered to myself. 

As I walked outside, the sound of my cellphone just got louder. I traced everywhere near the car, it wasn't there. I looked around, to see a light and a buzzing sound come from one of the bushes. 

I went to the bush and picked up my phone. Someone left a voice message. I clicked on the voice message and put the phone near my ear. 

"If I were you, I'd get inside of that house right now." A husky, male voice, whispered to me. What does that mean. Is someone gonna kill me? I'm shaking, as I got inside the house and locked the door. 

"Good choice, Elizabeth" The same voice whispered to my ear, chuckled a little and then, dead silent. What is going on here? Was it because I touched that piano? 

It has been 5 minutes since I'm sitting here with my knees up to my face, hiding myself. When suddenly, a loud thomping on the door, the walls, the windows was heard. It was so loud, banging and thomping.Like a million of people was trying bust in. I was going to get up, and look outside. 

"Don't, you'll bring yourself into much trouble than you are now." The same voice whispered. I listened to him, maybe he was trying to protect me. But who is he? What is going on with this house? Why me? I'm so scared, and shaking, and I think I cried, until the noises calmed and I fell asleep..

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I'M KNEELING ON ONE KNEE AND WITH MY HANDS UP PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEE GIVE ME FEEDBACKS