Sweet Eternity (rewriten!!)

Chapter 7 - Pic of Kimmi

Authors Note: So I haven't uploaded in a long time cuz I feel like my story is kind of sucky and my chapters aren't long enough. I keep rewriting it (this being maybe my fifth time) but it just never seems long enough. I want to keep the plot i have going but I just don't know how to improve it much more than I have already tried. Okay well I hope you like the rewrite this time and here's my new chapter.

Chapter 7

Alana's POV

After school I drove home. I cannot believe i talked to Nick!! He must have thought I was so weird. I stuttered like such an idiot!! I'm so not cool.

I pulled up into the garage and got out of my car.

Did Nick really invite ME to Jason Rodwell's party? I mean I know Andy always invites me but I'm scared to be alone with him for more than a couple minutes. Who knows how long we'd be alone at a party in a huge house.

Kimmi is definately going to make me go. I dont know what I would rather do less? Watch SAW and have bad dreams for a month or go to a big party and make a fool out of myself in front of the whole school and Nick. I think I'll stick to SAW.

After I did the little homework I had (I usually do it during school) I headed down stairs to get a snack. My maid had the week off for holiday so I was all alone.

I grabbed a banana and a pack of raisins and walked into the dining room to sit.

A couple minutes later I heard Kimmi's signature knock on the door. I put the last bite of banana in my mouth and went to open the door.

Before me stood two beautifully dressed girls. The Blondie with pale skin and pretty hazel eyes on the right (Kimmi), wore a baby doll waisted, loose fitting, red cocktail dress that stopped just before her knees and nude heal, and the short haired girl with semi tanned skin on the left (Ally), wore a rose colored short dress that sat right at waist with a hemline grazing just above the knee, black tights, and black chunky heals.

"Wow you guys look amazing!! Wait why are you both so dressed up?" I asked dreading the answer. "Because we have a party to go to in an hour" Kimmi replied. I knew it. "I cant go to that party!!" I said trying to make my point. "You can and you will. Its about time you talked to Nick and there is no way we're going to let you give this up." Ally retorted. "Hey! I thought you were gunna be on my side!" I said feigning betrayal.

"Are you gunna let us in or are you going to make us stand out here in these heals all night?" Ally responded. "Yeah we have a party to get you ready for!" Kimmi added

Oh great. there is no way I'm getting out of this. "Alright come in." I said reluctantly "Yay! dress up time!!" Kimmi exclaimed,

This is going to be a long night..