Red Lips by vintagemonkeys is the first entry of the contest.
It was so good! The storyline was cute, the characters matching up with each other perfectly, and the romance was beautiful. Also, there were many details throughout the book, such as the reoccurring red, that tied the story together.
There were some things I did not like, however. For one thing, it was unedited in certain places. Also, the ending was kind of abrupt and skipped from their second day together to three years later.
Rating: 8/10
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