The third entry of this contest is these letters I write by TheDorkyBookWorm
I loved this story! It was interesting to see the story of someone after a breakup instead of falling in love. It included many good details, and the five stages were a good way of organizing it. Also, the support from all of the friends and family also seemed very real.
The only thing that really could have improved this is adding dates. It was hard to tell how long apart the chapters were, and when it did talk about time it made me realize that what I thought was a month was only a few days.
Rating: 9/10
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Romance Short Story Contest
Short StoryWelcome to the world of love and passion, where hard and easy relationships are treasured. This is the first Romance short story contest on my profile, and any entry is welcome, whether it is an already existing story or if you write it now that yo...
