3:AM Kisses by fistingluke is the second entry in the contest.
This story was very good! The details were great, and I found myself feeling the romance between the two build. I'm also glad that you kind of created two new characters that were only slightly related to One Direction, so it wasn't a full-on fanficiton
The only issue I had was with the characters, who got a bit confusing. The pronouns were off in many places and it was hard to tell who was a girl and who was a boy. The part with the tally marks on the door frame also confused me.
Score: 8.5/10
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Romance Short Story Contest
Short StoryWelcome to the world of love and passion, where hard and easy relationships are treasured. This is the first Romance short story contest on my profile, and any entry is welcome, whether it is an already existing story or if you write it now that yo...
