Everything Wrong With Chapter 2: See You On the Flip Side

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But new places,New operatoonities.
Operatoonities, ha I get it!

You have a blue shield on your back,fake leather straps in places etc.,and they actually give you a blue elf hat(I'm forced to wear it though).It kind of reminds me of some kind a legendary hero though....
*cough* legend of Zelda *cough cough* link *cough cough* why *cough*

Hey Zach! How's your morning?" Adande called. He's our leader of course.
With YouTube in mind, Adande = Swoozie

"Mornin' Zach" Anthony said before gobling up his breakfast like an absolute beast.
3 sins:
#1: Anthony = Anthony from Smosh
#2: Gobling? Is that like a baby goblin or something? Eh.
#3: Absolute beast? All inking are beasts, yes cute beasts, that you play as, but still beasts, and no one is convincing me elsewise.

Inklings? Nah more like Weaklings
OOOOOOOOO GET REKT SON

Wow, She's beautiful.
Dangit not frickin Romeo and Juliet again

SHE HAS A AEROSPRAY RG BRO, SHE LEVEL 5. NOT SAFE!!!
+1 sin: how is a Level 5 with an Aerospray RG not safe? Then again, I don't have a Wii U, so I can't play this...
-1 sin: FINALLY YOU GET THE FRICKIN IDEA ZACH

But she dropped something.I dropped down to get it when I realised it was her phone.I was motionless.
YA SEE I KNEW IT WAS FORESHADOWING

Name Ana
Last. Aquaria
Age. 14
Height 5"9
Weight 127.3 lbs
Birthplace Calimari County
Best friends Callie,Marie

Don't wanna get too....personal Lol
HOW IS THAT NOT PERSONAL OMFG

Another sin for: I just noticed, lack of Spacebar using, musta been lazy is all I can say

I actually found her apartment number... We actually live in the same building though. She MUST be new.
Wow, what a stalker... Eh, if it expands the plot line, I'm okay with it.

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Sin Count: 12
Sentence: Stalking (I actually found her apartment number...)

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So, we got through the POVs of the two main characters in the story. Apparently, Zach (this chapter's character's POV) is a stalker, Ana sounds kinda cute, and they're both goin Romeo and Juliet mode. Let's see how harmful the next chapter is... *reads next chapter*

Harmful to sin status: 360 noscope headshot 420BLAZEIT John Cena edition part lenny (ADHD fueled status)

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